All Comments on 'The Stepfather'

I liked your story, taking us through the different stages, feelings etc. until she knew she needed him as much as he needed her. Loved the ending where he sat behind her and brushed her hair. Definately a show of affection. Cool!!

This is exactly what I meant in my comment from yesterday... this story was PERFECT!!!

her daughter didn't

good job :)

Thoroughly enjoy it when the trepidation and denial end with some glorious needy sex. Excellently done and thanks once again.

Wyatt

an expert piece of writing...sensual and mature...a sensitive subject handled delicately and deliberately. i would love to read more about these two and how their relationship develops further...and what role does mother play in this triangle, if any and do step dad and step daughter become a true couple or are they doomed?

well done, SugarLady!!

love,

david xxx

I really liked when this story was going at first, but the daughters flip of not really being interesting in him much, to wanting to have sex with him changing in an instant kind of killed it for me. Would love to see a smoother transition. Otherwise, an okay read.

Absolutely love all your stories, your writing style! deep and passionate.

Thank you & please write more!

Did he call Karen "Christine", when they were getting down to it? Was that supposed to be mom's name? Seemed like Mom was pulling 2ble shifts every night, or getting some on the side. Good story, but he still needs to explain to Karen, why he'd been creeping on her all that time... Good for a part 2