by The Style Guy
if u like well written stroke material - for girls or boys - this one is a blast. welcome back style guy. keep em cumming!
Loved your story and I hope you continue it as a series. We can't have poor Maggie be the only one left out. Keep up the good work and I hope to read more in the not too distant future.
I think this story should have a couple more chapters..
Yes you left poor Maggie hanging.. I also think Bev needs
a little more loving.. If this is your sytle of writting,
yes it's good to have you back.. Looking forward to more of the same...
That was a great story. I am glad to see your back writing and I like your style of writing. I hope you write a sequel to this story so that Maggie can have her fun to.
For example: “Lori and Maggie wiggled out of there's.” (theirs), but "we're going to Heathers soccer match" (Heather's)