by Bazzza
I enjoyed this. It was rather sweet and I felt a twinge of sympathy for Irene. I was hoping that the two of them would get together - sucker for a happy-ever-after ending, I guess. Good job.
I really enjoyed this story. Perhaps you can write of further adventures with Irene.
Nice story with a ring of truth. The only false note was the final fling with Irene. Surely they would have used a condom?
An nice little story- kind of bittersweet. The characters are much realer than you usually find here.
Not meaning to minimize your work (which again, was very good) but I have to wonder if anyone else reading this was thinking of the scruffy-bearded guy from Flight of the Conchords....