All Comments on 'The Wicked Stepfather'

Very nice - just enough pacing to wonder what could happen next

Thanks for sharing

I love it, although incest isn't normally my thing, i thought it was well written and completely erotic, with a great twist! Keep up the great work! To an added comment to the person that called you "sick" you read the story, and yet you call the author sick, does that not make you sick as well?? Again keep up the great work! From one author to another,

~destinyrose

Would love it if you could right a second chapter as this was really enjoyable.

Keep up the good writing

Makes me wish I was the daughter in that one. Very well written and twisted just enough to make it erotic. Some people need to learn the difference in sick and naughty. You're going in my favorites list.

Danielle

Very very good, we need more more more more!!!

Nicely written, however I can't help but think that the situation is going to lead to the breakup of the marriage as the wife gets less and less attention.

Needs continuing. Amy needs to become a Mommy as well.

Hello Mr. RawHumor,

Your story is magnificent - a very special Daddy/daughter wonder. I'm a huge fan of this type of beautiful relationship. Your story has done it justice.

Now that you have the positions defined, you need to make Catherine a grandma and Amy a Mommy and let Catherine begin her slave role, babysitting her grandchildren as you and Amy start your own family of babies. Perhaps one time when Amy is pregnant, you can knock Catherine up, too?

Come on! It's an erotic story site!

Raw this just rocked! I want more!

OHHHHHHH!!!!!! i would love more.........

Sexy, a little short imo, could fill a bit more on this one :)

How fucking fantastic was that ... I need more from this one.

Thank you for the pleasure

This is one of the HOTTEST fantasies I've ever read.

I could barely hold myself from exploding, but wanted to read all the way to the end.

Very well done, RawHumor. Encore! Encore!

Seriously that was the best thing i have ever read

Seriously. Catherine just like, took it? Pfft. Any real woman would have been like, "No, go fuck yourself, get away from my kid, and fall off a cliff."

But fantasies will be fantasies, I suppose. It was a cute story. Amy was adorable. She seems quite happy with her new role, so it was a good birthday present.

And, of course, the scene was hot as always, Raw.

Wow my pussy is so wet. I love the control. The mom sucking her daughter's pussy was completely amazing. I wish I had a stepdad like that.

like i said just brilliant. Cathrine showed a true submissive side... what else would a submissive do but follow her master's orders? I hope there is more to come.

delightful... just delightful

That is one of the greatest stories I've ever read.

My step-daughter who is now 21. Very hot blonde, blue eyes, 34b 26 34. Her mom is a very sensual 49 year old dirty blonde, ice blue eyes 36c 26 36 who catches eyes everywhere we go. It was hard for me to wait to Fuck my step-daughter who is now my little submissive lil fucktoy. Her mother is also a very horny submissive fucktoy. It is my goal, my fantasy of joining the 3 of us to complete my fantasy. If I only knew how to ask, I think they would both be game. The fear Im having, is the thought of loosing the opportunity of fucking either of them. We've nearly been caught on several occasions which would have been obvious to most but, she hasn't ever said anything. Probably because I Fuck her so well too. Until I get the advice that works to join the 3 of us, I'll keep fucking them separately. Looking for advice...

only a sick woman with no damn backbone or self worth would allow a man to do such a thing in her home. your pathetic, get some help asshole.

I would have liked the story to be a little longer, and perhaps explored the slavery of the mother to the daughter more.

i agre with the other coment`s. this would be realy good if you carry it on with the daughter controlling her mother more,plus may be bringing in others as well

you are the grossest thing ever, no person, daughter or mom would do that. your a sick fuck. who needs help. you mother fucker wanna-be. you should be arrested or anyone else who think this is alright. im 16. and i would kill my stepfather if he touched me or fricken even look at me like this. and this better not be true cause you need to be in jail or in a mental instituation. sex is a gift not a right and you cant just be doing with who ever u like.

awful.

AMAZING SO HOT !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

It's fucked up - I'll deal and get lost.

Why do people feel the need to object to a story on moral grounds on literotica, even worse on incest/ taboo category? Great story btw would love a sequel.

To the 16 year old. Face it there is alot of this that really happens. And the girl in the.story was 19. And if that girl would like she can email me at samhop42@gmail.com

What I don't get is why idiots read this when all they can do is bitch about it, shut the fuck up assholes and stay out of this section if it offends you so much. We don't care about hearing you complain and for the 16 yr old, little girl you do not belong here. Go cry to daddy little girl, to me you are the fucked up one for reading incest storie's so young. Secretly wishing for daddie's cock are we Kid. Ignore the cry baby haters, they are of no importance. This is your story and you can write any way you like, they don't like it they do not have to read it. Fuck em. Its their weak ass religous shame or just flat out shame that has them being ungratful pricks, this is their dirty dark fantasy and they just can not stand or admit to themsselves that they got off to it so they act like fools because of their guilty pleassure, cowards.

Damn! That was so hot.

It was a great story with a erotic twist at the end. Maybe you will write a continuation?

Thank you so much,

Lisa

This is my favourite story, so good.

Well, too bad we don't have more chapters of this saga. Starts out really hot and intense.