by Rumple Foreskin
Call me Polly...lol. RF this was hot, you devil you. Heck, I wish my first time was this good. Good luck on the contest!
Just like... Well, never mind. Great little story, Rumple. Effortless and natural. You make it so look easy.
Wow! I really enjoyed this story!
Not overdone with sex, but the passion lept off the screen nonetheless. I like the bits of humour you injected into this story. This story wasn't clicheed to me. I liked that.
Good job, RF. And good luck!
"A rude and crude guy like me" -- he was? I want one too. It was simply superb RF. Sweetly romantic. Another five from me.
Congrats, RF! This is the first of your stories I've read and I really enjoyed it. I wish someone would make a deal with me, so I wouldn't have to worry about being so wanton! Nice story and an excellent telling. Thanks, I'll be back to the Rumple Memberpage, no doubt!
~lucky
All weak in the knees. Such a combination of bad boy and saint can get you in all kinds of trouble. You'll have us girls running to you in droves...Fantastic story, sweet and sinful.