All Comments on 'Truth or Dare'

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yaziquexyaziquexover 15 years ago
That was sexy,

...really, really sexy.

Great use of language,

Sensual word choices and narrative,

but at the same time something that very much arouses.

You want criticism?

Well, in a way, whether true or not (see: nomatter what your argument people will just always have that doubt!) a story like this may be more effective if such a claim is omitted, or perhaps kept short and sharp... Personally I'm just saying: It usually puts me off a little bit.

Dafydd1Dafydd1over 15 years ago
It's all in the anticipation

A tantalising short story which bears most of Tony Dowse’s hallmarks: attention to detail, an original plot, a sexy location (which I know personally but sadly not as intimately as the lucky narrator) and the sense of drawn-out expectation. As ever with him, this is not a quick shag story. Indeed, there is very little physical sexual activity – it is almost all in the mind...and the anticipation is very arousing indeed. The link to his ‘Lucy’ story is also very appropriate and reminds me that I must read it again.

Dafydd.

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