All Comments on 'Twins'

Very good story line. Hope you continue it on with more family being added.

You seem to have a problem with with word pairs such as sight/site and mater/matter. Also, during the first quarter to third you keep switching from past to present tense. These are the things that ruin the flow of another wise good story.

Terrific story of fucking between family, extended family, and evidently all in between and on the fringes.

Action was fast and cumimg all over. First time such as this would be excellent to be a part of, any more family to be included? Keep the story cuming - or should I say going?

Very nice story line and I liked the past and present feature you added, no matter what anyone else says. You have a vivid imagination when you write.. Keep it up and please submit more of the same.. Thank you JP399

I wish I had a family like this one.....great story....

We got to the sight and set up camp

Latter I returned the favor

she is not wearing (a) bra

Other wise (Otherwise)

who ever (whoever)

started tasking off dad's shirt (taking)

any time you want them (anytime)

taking you all by her self (herself )

doing be hind our backs (behind)

to my sister wet pussy (sister’s)

came at the same time and fill my wife (filled)

taken my loan in her mouth (load)

with out a pussy to lick (without)

The camp SITE not sight.

"Otherwise" is one word, not as you have it "other wise."

I could go on, but could not be bothered.

Don’t care about the grammar only the sex. Fabulous incest fucking and sucking, the girl on girl and eating the Cum from each other’s cunts. I adore cunt and the more I get the more I want, getting totally drunk on cunt juice and out of control with cunt lust, eating it and fucking it. Cunt crazed sex maniac, Lanc’s UK . More and more of this please and soon.