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ythebadgerythebadgerover 11 years ago
Different

Well-written. I'll leave it to the usual bunch of philosophy students to decide whether any actual 'cheating' happened or not.

LordSlamdawggLordSlamdawggover 11 years ago
Quirky but Comptetent Snippet !

Usually when writer focuses on action & little else I try to suggest the author fill in the story a bit. Here the people don't sound too interesting outside of the frottage that was detailed fairly well.

Personally, I'd be vexed if this happened to

me & the vixon left me high & dry. She was like a gig in heat that tries to rub self off against your leg. If the author wrote a complete story I'm sure my vote would be in 4-5 star range. Until that fine day ....

chytownchytownover 11 years ago
Good Read***

I bet you had fun writing this one! Thanks for sharing.

JusttooldJusttooldover 11 years ago
good

Well done. I liked it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Dumb.

The perfect woman. Yeah. Right. Like the saying goes: "No matter how good looking she is, some guy, somewhere, is tired of putting up with her crap."

adgeonadgeonover 11 years ago
That was fun!

I enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing.

imhaplessimhaplessabout 6 years ago
cute and entertaining

I liked it 5* worth

tazz317tazz317about 6 years ago
OLFACTORY SENSATIONS

one of the ways to mind-fuck-up a relationship. TK U MLJ LV NV

26thNC26thNCalmost 6 years ago
Liked it

Interesting story.

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Creative writing major in college. Made a career as a history teacher. My high school English teacher once told me that, should I ever encounter writer's block, try writing a pornographic scene. She said "a love scene," but I knew what she meant.