by Wulfwinter
I guess I should have expected it, but I was very disapointed with his calling the cops after evrything he made the 2 girls do.
damn good writing but the end sucked..
after all he put them thru it wasn't right...
please keep writing but please don't do this again...
Great hot story. He should have held the pics over them to get them every night.
I would have given it 100 till he called the cops. It ruined the whole story.
Didn't like the ending. And the story was too long and drawn out. Also, too much oral stuff. The details of oral sex became boring after the first couple of paragraphs. More penetrative sex would have made the story more interesting. Most of the sex acts were very redundant. Good plot overall, but the story was too drawn out.
I agree with many of the other comments. It was OK until the end, but then the ending spoilt it.
911 has his cell phone number to trace. And if the girls report being raped, his ass is grass waiting to be cut. Cute endings seldom help a story and in many cases like this ruin them unless of course it was his two daughters he caught.
How would you feel if some man shoved his stiff bare cock inside both your adoring daughters ????
Sarah Leather
leathercatsuitgirl@hotmail.co.uk
I agree, it was a well wrtten story, but if my daughters were doing the crime, they should be prepared to do the time. However, calling 911 was a terrible waste, when they could have been a scheduled booty call on demand.
The story was great but the ending sucks. He should have left it so he could continue to use these girls again and again.
ohmylord! wayyy too long, Redundant and the ending is ridiculous. no thanks! please do not quit your day job lol.
A dick move to still report them after all their fun.
Not to mention stupid since he just threw away a chance at an encore from the horny girls
You should change the ending man, and had them go Scot free for him to fuck them again and become his booty call, hell from this they would become a couple, a bisexual couple with him ducking them