All Comments on 'Vandalism Blackmail'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Wrong ending

I guess I should have expected it, but I was very disapointed with his calling the cops after evrything he made the 2 girls do.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Great until the end!!!

damn good writing but the end sucked..

after all he put them thru it wasn't right...

please keep writing but please don't do this again...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
great

i liked all of it even the ending

oldwinooldwinoalmost 17 years ago
Hot Story

Great hot story. He should have held the pics over them to get them every night.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Bad ending

Ending bad, no morals, no honour.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
the ending sucked

I would have given it 100 till he called the cops. It ruined the whole story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Bad ending

Didn't like the ending. And the story was too long and drawn out. Also, too much oral stuff. The details of oral sex became boring after the first couple of paragraphs. More penetrative sex would have made the story more interesting. Most of the sex acts were very redundant. Good plot overall, but the story was too drawn out.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
The ending spoilt it

I agree with many of the other comments. It was OK until the end, but then the ending spoilt it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Kinda sick calling the cops. But then of course

911 has his cell phone number to trace. And if the girls report being raped, his ass is grass waiting to be cut. Cute endings seldom help a story and in many cases like this ruin them unless of course it was his two daughters he caught.

leathercatsuitgirlleathercatsuitgirlalmost 11 years ago
Nice story but ....

How would you feel if some man shoved his stiff bare cock inside both your adoring daughters ????

Sarah Leather

leathercatsuitgirl@hotmail.co.uk

nighthawk22204nighthawk22204about 10 years ago
Where are your daughters tonight?

I agree, it was a well wrtten story, but if my daughters were doing the crime, they should be prepared to do the time. However, calling 911 was a terrible waste, when they could have been a scheduled booty call on demand.

Prime9Prime9over 7 years ago
TERRIBLE ENDING

The story was great but the ending sucks. He should have left it so he could continue to use these girls again and again.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
stop writing

ohmylord! wayyy too long, Redundant and the ending is ridiculous. no thanks! please do not quit your day job lol.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

A dick move to still report them after all their fun.

Not to mention stupid since he just threw away a chance at an encore from the horny girls

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

You should change the ending man, and had them go Scot free for him to fuck them again and become his booty call, hell from this they would become a couple, a bisexual couple with him ducking them

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