All Comments on 'What Once Was Innocent Ch. 01'

Hopefully there will be more to come.

If he is 40y old and he was married at 20, that would be around 1987. How could he be using the internet in the late 80s or even in the early 90s? Do a little research at least.

(This is a response to the moronic question of how Garrett could use the internet in the mid-80's.) The internet originated in the 60's and was already widely used by 1985. Research? It's an amateur fantasy story, you idiot! Do a little more reading instead of analyzing. And do a little research yourself before you respond and come off as a dumb ass. Thanks for reading! :)

If you want to write a book or short story, please take it elsewhere.

The world wide web was invented in 1990, and before that the Internet was just a connection in between universities. Well written stuff otherwise. Who cares about detail accuracy?

Hot! Licking my lips in anticipation of the next chapter...

very sexy start - great tease. can't wait to read chapter 2. 5 stars!