by blondechristine2012
Yes please continue on with the story line can’t wait to see if someone was set up
Please please carry on, A well written sexy story, great build up
You capture the dynamic of female to female intimacy and sexuality with such a keen sense or eroticism without being cheap or tawdry. Its a bit like being the voyeur Paul being invited in to watch two ladies express their love in a lush physical form. Everything is crisp and well done without being overdone. Marvelous. I agree with the rest of the people here I think when I say, "Yes, more of this please."
This is extremely erotic to me... I seem to be in a parallel story in real life and this is great! Please continue.
This story is so well written and is extremely erotic. I would love for you to continue as I am curious to see how the relationship blossoms at the work place and if Sarah and Chrissy engage in a menace a trois with Paul.
More please but please don't ruin the marriage
Really lovely story so far; hoping to read more chapters very soon!
I have a great imagination, but your writing made it vivid. Thank you so much!
Quite a good start; has potential. A somewhat similar set-up thematically speaking to Ripley's "It Didn't Work Out" but maybe a different outcome? Or a similar outcome after exploring the options? Hope you keep writing.