All Comments on 'Workplace Love Ch. 02'

by blondechristine2012

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NewnotsureNewnotsureabout 6 years ago
Wow

Yes please continue on with the story line can’t wait to see if someone was set up

savage4xsavage4xabout 6 years ago
More Please

Very erotic, thanks once again for writing and sharing x

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Great story

Please please carry on, A well written sexy story, great build up

FOUNTAINPEN67FOUNTAINPEN67about 6 years ago
Gorgeous imagery, tenderly executed. Five stars

You capture the dynamic of female to female intimacy and sexuality with such a keen sense or eroticism without being cheap or tawdry. Its a bit like being the voyeur Paul being invited in to watch two ladies express their love in a lush physical form. Everything is crisp and well done without being overdone. Marvelous. I agree with the rest of the people here I think when I say, "Yes, more of this please."

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Yes, please continue

This is extremely erotic to me... I seem to be in a parallel story in real life and this is great! Please continue.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Oh My Gosh

This story is so well written and is extremely erotic. I would love for you to continue as I am curious to see how the relationship blossoms at the work place and if Sarah and Chrissy engage in a menace a trois with Paul.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
menace a trois?

Sounds dangerous, lol!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
More Please!!!

That was great!! You should write more!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
More please but please don't ruin the marriage

More please but please don't ruin the marriage

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Most Outstanding!

Really lovely story so far; hoping to read more chapters very soon!

RonnieTheCuriousRonnieTheCuriousabout 3 years ago
WOW

I have a great imagination, but your writing made it vivid. Thank you so much!

AnyMooseAnyMooseabout 2 years ago

Quite a good start; has potential. A somewhat similar set-up thematically speaking to Ripley's "It Didn't Work Out" but maybe a different outcome? Or a similar outcome after exploring the options? Hope you keep writing.

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I have always loved writing and have used it both for pleasure and in my work. Recently my attention has turned more and more towards writing erotica. That was prompted by reading some stuff on Lit, so it seemed logical to publish on here. My divorce and being alone may hav...

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