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All Comments/Replyகாமக் கவிதையாகத் தொடங்கி ஒரு சிறு கதையாய் முடித்து ஒரு வரியில் அதிர்ச்சியான திருப்ப உச்சம்! பாராட்டுக்கள்
All Comments/ReplyNice but
All Comments/Replyஅருமை, எனக்கு இந்த கவிதை பிடிக்கும், அது மிகவும் அழகாக எழுதப்பட்டுள்ளது .... இது போன்ற மேலும் கவிதைகளை படிக்க விரும்புகிறேன்
All Comments/ReplyLovely,
எனக்கு இந்த கவிதை பிடிக்கும், அது மிகவும் அழகாக எழுதப்பட்டுள்ளது .... இது போன்ற மேலும் கவிதைகளை படிக்க விரும்புகிறேன்
All Comments/Replythis poem catches the mood so well... it shows how we need a release, and we are desperate for that touch that provides the release. And, the whole scenario depicts a cheating scene...this whole expression is so true!
All Comments/ReplyThanks for sharing , this poem is so sensual and erotic please keep it up , waiting for your more poems as you are fame in erotic writers community , this poem is example of your skill.
All Comments/Replyдуша чистая, но поэзии нет здесь совсем.
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All Comments/Replyவாவ் என்ன ஒரு அருமையான கதை, சூப்பர்
All Comments/Reply<a href="http://thathuva-chinthanaikal.blogspot.com/2014/08/blog-post_16.html">தத்துவ சிந்தனைகள் : உடலுறவு (பாலுறவு) தத்துவம் - Sexual intercourse in Tamil</a>
All Comments/ReplyKya baat hai
All Comments/ReplyI am interested in seeing this translated. Although I'm sure poetry doesn't translate well.
All Comments/Reply"Your eyes are like the moon, like the sun would call when I'm with you I've found the greatest love"
Very beautiful
All Comments/ReplyAapni ki choda chara anyo kono fetishey interested jemon dhorun spanking ?
All Comments/Replymeeru cheppinatle...ee pookuni vadalaka ruchi choodali...
okko pooku okko ruchilo ooristhai
anduloonu amma pooku vasana choosthene kaaripothadi..
kooothuri pooku chaala lethagaa vuntadi..
akka pooku kammaga vuntadi
atta balisina kuttalo gootam dimpithe...aa sukhame veeru..
ilaanti...
All Comments/ReplyLoved "Kaya badan khol kar aap, yun hi diya karate hain" ... and also the last stanza. :)
All Comments/Replywohhhhha
All Comments/Replyhello i am from India but do not understand Bengali, So please translate for me.
All Comments/Replyby the way indian_siddh we r the girls 4m jaipur hostel we touch in ur submission by chance we really like it plz become chain writer.we r curious to talk with u
All Comments/ReplyLagta hai ye sab tume apni maa ko bolte suna hai lode. teri behen ki choot. bhenchod teri behen randi
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