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bflagsstabout 15 years agowhy lose the beat in the last line?
It's awkward doing a whole poem in meter then ruining the last line with extra syllasillines. It's kinda awkward for me to be commenting on something you could care less about. oh well.
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bb_peaks@bb_peaksI just enjoy writing erotica. It comes and goes in spurts. Hoping the cum spurting part comes back soon. :D
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