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is mentioned in the new poetry reviews.

I walk forward

and look down

at the shattered pieces

of my trust

and stand there

hands by my sides

as Hope,

the pale winged butterfly

flutters away.

Wonderful work!

IMHO some of your poems do much more 'telling' rather than 'showing'. Your work is much stronger when you 'paint the picture' instead of just describing it.

Keep reading and writing!