by Many Feathers
This is an earthy and lusty poem. It's not cliché and silly. You really did a good job with this one. It has some wonderful images, like the puffer fish and the farty patch of moss. lol I really like the description of you flying across the sky and tinkling. Oh, and you made it kind of sweet and charming with "Such are the thoughts of a silly assed man."
whether it was silly or not it shouldn't matter, a good poem can be all sorts of things.