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by Many Feathers

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WickedEveWickedEvealmost 15 years ago
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This is an earthy and lusty poem. It's not cliché and silly. You really did a good job with this one. It has some wonderful images, like the puffer fish and the farty patch of moss. lol I really like the description of you flying across the sky and tinkling. Oh, and you made it kind of sweet and charming with "Such are the thoughts of a silly assed man."

Epmd607Epmd607almost 15 years ago
I liked this poem

whether it was silly or not it shouldn't matter, a good poem can be all sorts of things.

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