All Comments on 'slut'

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LadyJeanneLadyJeanneabout 19 years ago
I love this!

Inner sluts unite! A woman who has an inner slut awaiting to break out should be appreciated, treasured, cherished...a man who can't do that is a fool. Terrific poem. So simple, so true! Thank you, LJ.

Softouch911Softouch911about 19 years ago
Very tight!

If you're going to write a short poem, this is the way to do it. A declaration, a revelation, an insight, some passion ... it makes me want you more!

Bridget69Bridget69about 19 years ago
!

How true it is that we all have a wild side just waiting to be unleashed.

~photoguy~~photoguy~about 19 years ago
short, sexy

great work, short but powerful

B

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
A Step

Great song to the wild side. The writing of it, seems to be a step toward untying and freeing the wild side. Of transforming the word slut from a put down to the highest compliment available.

sexmatesexmateabout 19 years ago
This is what we want!

In the bedroom! I want my wife to be herself, but when it comes time she needs to be my slut in the bedroom! Unleash it! You will be suprised at yourself and happier for it!

Thanks for writing!

Sexmate

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
double edge

maybe sometimes we have to tie up the desires we hold inside, mine would consume me if I didn't. This is a lovely poem that speaks not only of freedom but control as well. Sabina

supahstoopidsupahstoopidabout 19 years ago
Veritas

Another great poem. This is the side to a woman that can often only be seen in the bedroom between lovers--pure unadulterated passion, succumbing to fantasy and lust, uninhibited and utterly.

Bill DadaBill Dadaalmost 19 years ago
Let Her Loose!

TY,BD

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