All Comments on 'Summer Skin'

Very good work, SJ!

The first stanza did it for me! Observe listen feel all mixed, and no further explanations needed.

This poem has been selected for listing in Wednesday's New Poems Review.<br>

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I love the flow of this poem. The phrasing, the breaks. It's an excellent synthesis between heart and reason, I think- at least from the way a woman might look at it. I was pulled in and swept along at a wonderful pace. I think you did an excellent job. Caught, captured, vulnerable and yet distinctly itself. Thank you.

The first stanza particularly really drew me in; your imagery is so clear I really felt like I was there. Very nicely written, and quite graceful.