All Comments on 'Sunset'

Miss Colleen you've done it again. I never imagined poetry could turn me on, but I have just been lusciously proven wrong. The sights, sounds and smells all fill my senses and the stirrings conjured up are quite delicious. Thanks for sharing your sunset...it was beautiful.

and I'll keep saying it until you believe it. Just because you say you're not a poet doesn't make it so. Wonderfully erotic, Colly.

- Mindy

restrained images with some interesting rhyming pairs. Very good.

jim :)

I'm not into erotic peotry, but yours made me think.

Words that bring visions... visions that bring dreams. Exquisite pictures dancing in the mind.

True love at sunset.

A visual, sensual and lyrical delight.