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There are some grammatical errors, and you have jumped into the subject too quickly. It seems that you need a lot of practice in writing Nepali stories, as you seem to be expert in Spanish. Yo pahilo Nepali katha vaekole maile yeslai 5 stars diye. But I am waiting for more of your stories, and I hope you will improve it.

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