by YKN4949
I'm a F2M transgender & often wish that one day I'd wake up with s penis (though larger than 3.5" :-P)
Loved the fic. U should definitely continue with it.
You really do have a gift with words. This is one of the better written stories I have ever read. Please write another.
Hot story, very hot actually. I would not mind see a continuation of this, perhaps where Mina wants to get a bigger cock, or gets a girlfriend.
I'm kinda dripping wet now.. I seriously hope you continue. She should totally have sex with that cheer leader again! And question.. She stil
Can reproduce? And she came in the doctor..so does this mean the doctor is possibly prego? Unless she got her tubes tied or something. I love that the main character is damn near fucking anyone who comes in contact with her :).
I just though...she didn't break up with her boyfriend either O_o he could possibly into futanari girls...
It sounds like the semanal fluid might even be addictive. You left me wanting a second chapter. Thank You.
dear god almighty, this truly is one one of the bloody best stories i have ever read!
this story includes pretty much all of my fantasies (sorry for bad spelling)
pretty much everything in this story is perfect in my opinion
to just name a few: main girl grows a penis, she fucks pretty much everyone she sees, has sex with only girls and other trannies = TWINS!, the way she stimulates them to having sex, ...
oh God i love it!
so yeah great story (especially tranny twins :P )
i would die for a sequel <3 (PS: don't bother with the bf) 5 stars aren't nearly enough for this
all of the above is ofc my opinion :)
i truelly loved this story. it was well written and hot! i, like many, are really hopeing for more of this. id love to make a suggestion for the sequal. how about they find away to enlarge her dick and then she uses it to dom her cheerleader friend and then get really hawt with it by doming her mom.
Very well written I didn't want it to end please make more chapters with her continuing to screw pretty much everything!
omg iloved ur story i have read lots of futa stories and mangas but this was perfect this was just so realistic then wat i usually read 5 stars pleaze write more
yould should definitely put some sequels to this take it as far as you can. this is one my fav types of stories where normal girls suddenly sprout a dick.
But this story some how made it so it was hot enough, and I was able to get into it before It really turned. Very good job!
Nicely done! Looking forward to the next chapter! Dr. Marta Preggers would be so hawt!
If the girls make everyone around them really horny I feel like theres a good opportunity for a very sexy cheerleader orgy!
Fantastic work. I would love to see more.
it would be awesome if you continued and made her pussy open up again,like another part of the"side effect".
This is a fabulous crossdressing story. Very different from the normal stuff.
It would be great if like others say, she could make her dick bigger, get rid of her boyfriend and make Lucy her girlfriend. And it would be awesome to know if her dick can make others pregnant, like Lucy, and if her pussy opens again.
Found this one as well as one of your other stories (Jealousy) by random searches. Loved them both.
As for this one, like many of the other commenters, I too would love to see a sequel, after all, it's only her first day having a dick, right. And if it grew 3.5 inches overnight, how much bigger could it get after a week?
Personally, I am a big fan of the 'transformative' stories, and I love it when an author can really do it justice.
I am surprised. This isn't the sort of story I's usually go for but I was into it and hooked before I realised. It's amazing. I do hope Mina gets sorted out though. Thanks. Please keep writing.
It was good and I felt compelled to give it 5 stars. Keep up the awesome work.
IDB
I would love to read a second part maybe one where the urge and the dick both become bigger... also I would like to read about her having her way with men!
that is an awsome suggestion!
Like everybody else i was very impressed with this story and the novel concept you introduced here. That's one reason i hope you don't take any of our suggestions too seriously or try to deliver on any particular request. That seems like a good way to miss out on whatever else might be lurking in your brain for us to read. You write whatever you wanna write and I'll bet it turns out great. I, for one, found the little dicks and the idea of a cock having a *feminine* aspect to it sexy as hell! Put in big dicks if you want, but I'd say there's no shortage of big dicks in this place! Just give us your idea of sexy! Your new Fan
I think it would be cool for her to meet some more "patients", like support group, possibly an orgy, but please more of the twins! Maybe in a 69 while being taken by another two patients.
I would love to know what they used to make that drug, maybe Hish based?? but yes I would also love to see more from these girls in story and action I think this and the "Island for Dickgirls" series are some of the best futa-based stuff I have read in a long time.
i particularly like the idea of their penis growing as the story progresses and possibly their vagina returning to add some seriously kinky stuff to the story but which ever direction you decide to take it im sure it will be just as enjoyable as this one i for one enjoyed the story and would like to see more
well i would say continue it as it is maybe have them grow to a normal size, and find out that they are unusually potent and children cause by this default and have both organ sets fully developed for a baby at birth.
amazing story, brilliantly detailed. left me thinkin of all the things she could do now. you should continue the story with different experiences, maybe make it like episodes. you could even have it where her bf finds out n things take an unexpected turn. you are an amazing writer, keep up the good work! :)
My first question is, does Doctor Marta get pregnant?? That would be the biggest, best and most thrilling turn on that I can imagine!!!
The story tickled my fancy; it is extremely unusual and I'm certainly glad she's decided to keep the little dick. Since it suddenly sprung up over night maybe there is a chance that it will continue to grow!
The author has done a good job of conveying the theme and dialogue and expressions of the characters. There is a Chapter 02, which I'm immediately proceeded to at this exact moment!! And I do hope Doctor Marta gets pregnant!!!
So many have given so many suggestions. I have none, other than maybe ignore their advice. Up to you!
Very interesting idea and great expansion. I liked your story a lot!
- K
It was fantastic. Just one thing dissappointed me: I was expecting the three girls to have different penises. It would be hot if one of them had gotten a big 7'' dick for example and to see the main characters reaction.
But again, great story. Thank you.
this has got to be the best story I have read on here yet. Keep UP the good work.;)
since she is a cheerleader she might be limber enough to give herself a blowjob. Not an impossible task. All she has to do is lay on her back and bring her knees over her head and her feet against the headboard and push her hips closer and closer to her mouth. Hey, that might be in a future chapter! I loved the story, keep up the good work.
very well writin looking forward to more for you soon it was mouth wattering yours leann mawh XXX
This is my favorite theme for stories and I wish there were more like it. However, you did a wonderful job with the character and it was very erotic. Thanks.
You really need to continue this story.
The story was awesome...
Given all the side effects of mostly untested medications I could honestly see this happening to someone since most new meds get pulled within 5 years because of the side effects.
You should be proud of this story, with it being super erotic and very, very good. This deserves the 5 stars I'm giving it without a doubt :), And as others have said before me, this has the potential to have a squeal (And would be awesome if it did), so will you be continuing on with it? Either way, Brilliant Story.
Lovely story. I would like to see one featuring an anatomical arrangement that includes your heroine's clitoris-grown-penis-like while retaining a functional vagina, a la female hyenas, in the same vein. Would it be all right to swipe the general idea of an experimental drug in a clinical situation and have a go at this theme?
First time I've ever voted or commented, but your story is original, well written and sexy as hell. Would love a follow-up xx
Great story. Would have loved to have had the twins come in and all three girls make Dr Marta airtight!!! Would also like to have Mina become co-captain with Lucy and them become long time lovers. It would also add to the story to have Mina get both Dr Marta and Lucy pregnant.
Please continue with the sequels!!!
it would be a crime if you didn't make this a series.
I hope you share more of your writing with us ........fantastic !
Stephen J
I loved the story. Think the other girls should join them. Gang fuck the doctor. Fill her up.
This story truly felt like it could've happened with how you brought the characters to life, and in a realistic way, too. The story was good and didn't feel like it dragged on because of the interesting plot. Overall, this is a true work of art in writing.
YKN4949 I love that story. I was right there every second . . . . all my tactile senses were on high. At first the story line caught me off guard but then, it picked up momentum and swept me along.
I need to see the story line continue but, of course, I see Mina's cock growing with each new encounter. At some point I see it at full size, say 11", thick, very thick and with heavy veins. It occurs to me that Mina eventually gets back to school and finds that rather than pursuing cheerleading she takes the roll of servicing her girl friend . . . . more please.
A well developed and creativity erotic storyline that was deliscously enticing! Your attention to detail helped bring your engaging characters to life. A well told story that definitely nerds to continue with a eventual cheerleading orgy as the twins and Mina seduce them all.
Your transgender-type stories are terrific. They build beautifully, scene by scene, varying the kind of sexual activity skilfully and cumulatively. This one is ingenious and packs in so much, I love your shemale stories. More, please! Norma Jane.
Not sure how you come up with your ideas but they are terrific. Thank you so much.
If you can write a better one I sure will read it. Good luck with that, and if you want to continue this story I can't wait!!
wow! you have a gift. keeping sharing your talent with the world.
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Great story I was hard the entire time reading it I would love to hear this story continue it would like to see how cheer turns out and if her boyfriend freaks or is cool with it and maybe if her and Lucy end up together but great story
Very erotic 'what if' story. More of Mina Lucy and the twins would be wonderful.
I really loved the story, I don't know if side effects can do that but you found a way of making it easier and believable.
The story was awesome i would love to see a young lady with a cock who is super horny i would have fucked you too and anyone else that wanted it.
I've no experience or knowledge of TG ways.
But I suspect this story might have gne well in SciFi. . . .
Was a good story, but itβs hard to get excited when the girls have what basically amounts to micropenises. I also really find it annoying when authors on here misuse tags. I was led to this story after searching for the term βfutaβ, but was disappointed when I found no futanari at all, but dickgirls/transgirls. Itβs misleading to use the wrong tags for stories as I probably would never have read it if I knew there was no futanari present.
fun read,,really liked it,,the sex is fast and furious,,need a breather,,not much story line. but you know that.
I'm pretty sure she's only 17 - would be better if she was 18 tbh. P ok otherwise
You write amazing, hot, stories with fast and furious, wonderful sex. It is weird that people who can barely read and write struggle through the whole story, lick their cum covered hands and then give stupid negative comments.
Congratulations on another wonderful cum filled plot!
It could be a curse. What happens to the women who drink the magic cum. Does she create a haram and have magical sex with a select few. Can sex with anyone else be just as intense. Can they turn other women into their special sex creatures?
Love this story so much. Love the whole plot,
the girlish dicks, the hot libido as side effect.
So good for me to imagine all the horny pictures.
Wunderfull. Looking forward for all your other stories.
A lot to read and a lot to have fun, hehe.
And .... thankfully greetings from Germany. :-))
This is a really nice story!!!! Very sexy!!!! I'm making it a favorite!!!!!
Absolutely loved this story! A unique story line, with natural transitions into the experimentation between people. Your writing in this story caused my mind to slip into the story with a desire to be in the middle of all these characters, making sure they knew how desirable they are and how they could draw one in to their desires. Thanks for this story.
"A Big Side Effect Ch. 01:" - First read this story about eight (8) years ago. Loved it then and more so now. I'm surprised now that Dr Marta, and Mina's best friend Lucy are not yet pregnant (Ha, just a joke). Seriously, though, in very few of these type stories does the real fucked female ever gets impregnated--which is a big turn-on!! On to Chapter 02, for the second time.
As a footnote, there are many correctly spelled words, but were incorrectly used! One (1) quick example is "feel" was used instead of "feet;" those type of words cannot be caught by spell-check, but an astute editor can find those "misplaced" words.
Amazing story, would love there to be more chapters, maybe the twins could come in and get in on the action with the doctor and other girl.
Great story, Mina made the right choice keeping her big, very cute clit. thanks
Loved the story thx so much for sharing! Very hot n erotic. I wish Iβd meet a woman with a nice cock and be able to sick it have her fuck me and play with her boobs as she fucks meβ¦..now that would be HOT af. Xx