All Comments on 'A Bigger Bed'

Awesome story..i loved it

Great fucking story! I am putting you under my favorite author bookmark! Great grammar and timeline. Keep em coming.

You have written of a fantasy, that any man would love to partake in, and it makes a very exciting story. I will be watching for the next chapter.Thank You for your very good story.......Rich

This has got to be one of the best sibling incest stories I've ever read... very realistic ;-) You are also added to my favorite authors list :)

This is HOT-HOT SEX! I cannot imagine any one guy having THREE such nubile nympho sisters. One should be more than enough when the two people are as vigorous as these are. In fact, that's the big weakness in the story: The climactic orgy turns into a confusing mishmash of a mare's nest (pun intended) which even the biggest bed couldn't help. Still, this is one of my favorite writers.

A great series of stories you and your co-author have written. As well as being hot, and having a good believable plot, your stories so far are respectful and considerate, a great model for this aspect of real relationships (safe sex aside - but this is fiction).

I hope your nearness to heaven relates to your environment and company, not any life threatening illness. You are favourited and bookmarked: you keep writing and I'll keep reading.

All the best ...

This was a great story. You and your Co-Author sure know how to make an erotic story. Keep up the good work.

well done to the author . well paced and hot with a good full story like a lot this writers work well done.

GREAT story, awesome pacing. This has got to be one of the best I have ever read. Keep writing, man, because you've got a talent.

I believe this is another favorite story. I cannot believe it. Though there are similarities between them, your stories never get repetitive. I will never know how you manage. Please tell me you publish some of your stories. It would be a shame if you didn't. Some sort of anthology perhaps?? That, I would buy in a heartbeat.

i can add all of your stories to my favorites....

really enjoyed your writting

once again bravo

I could only dream of a brother who would be as wonderful, as great lover as the one in this story. Since today is special for me, I think this story was meant to be a presents of sorts by the fates. It got be very aroused, I woke my lover and made love to him like the start of our relationship thanks to this story. It is well written, as my own are and it was a delight to read. Hope there is more from this writer soon.

very enjoyable

I am so glad that I have found your work. I hope you are able to continue to create these works of art.

Very enjoyable- more differentiation & personalization of each sister would be my sole constructive criticism. I did like the atmosphere of caring & love that enveloped the story at all times.

I so love brother and sister love. I regret not having a sister, just four brothers, but that's another story. Maybe I'll write it one day.

Thanks for a very well written and developed story. I gave it a 5.

I couldn't get into the story. You start by telling it in past tense, then you switched to present tense during the first encounter. It makes for a difficult read.

I had only two half sisters one two years younger but we were so close we could had been twins and the other 3yrs younger. my sisters came into my room one night when our parents where out for the knight and caught me jacking off to one of my step dads hustlers they both wanted to watch i got them to join in and afte that we could not wait for our parents to leave. i was 14 when we started and did not stop till i was 17 and left for the navy.

I have twin sisters now 50 and im 54 but growing up me and darlene always found love and yes sex with each other i do miss those days the other sis name i wont say was a bitch then and it has not changed ...funny to me the incest we had mad us better loving parents today ...no i didnt get her preg we just learnd compassion and giving to each other....as for mrs hard ass she remains a bitch even now she should have sucked me and her sister when we tried to include her instead of turing up her nose at us the bitch.....

tough story to write-have to strike a balance with plot and characters, so it's not silly or just sex with no soul, but nicely written good job thanks

A well written story, thanks for sharing.

We look forward to reading more of your stories.

i had read this one on another site and chose it as a fav there. i so enjoyed it here and am going to save to fav here, good job!!!

I would love to read a book on this like the parents being alive, the sisters having comfy night, brad peeping on his sisters. How does there future turn out. So many questions on this. It was very good. Would have love to been in that family.

Thankyou very much, I thoroughly enjoyed reading this believable story.

I especially like this. Probably because it is the most believable story on here that I've read in awhile. I can imagine a family devastated. The eldest brother and sister giving up their lives to pretty much be temporary 'parents' until the other two are ready to fly on their own. The frustration of a suddenly non-existant social or sex life while providing for the younger two and seeing that their lives proceed as normally as possible. And I can see the older two, especially as fraternal twins, seeking sexual comfort from and with each other. The younger two are at this point a bit of a stretch, but I can see that in this category - on this site - that they had to find an excuse to be involved. This WOULD make a good book. But in a book the story should be more about Brad and Penny's sex life together and their attempt to work it out and still be the parents. More about the antics and hoops they'd have to jump through to keep their secret secure. Probably not involving the two other sisters. In a full length book that would just make it one long orgy. But this is good as it is.

What a great story and under the circumstances quie believable. You could even do a sequel. Would love to see Brad and Penny stay together for life and also the other sisters elect to stay as de facto wifes as well, 5 stars well done

I don't remember ever giving 5* before and for that matter I don't give many 4s either. However, I so enjoyed this I had no hesitation. Apart from a couple of typos your plot construction, continuity and grammar were all good. It does deserve a sequel. Thanks.

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ANOTHER EXCELLENT STORY BY THE AUTHOR! AS I READ THIS STORY I'D WISHED I'D HAVE CONTACTED FRIENDS TO SEE ABOUT GETTING SOMETHING SO WELL WRITTEN PUBLISHED. ONE OF MY FAVORITE STORY'S NOW! EXCELLENT WRITING SKILLS! THANK YOU AGAIN!

And beautifully done as well. When a story is told as though the reader is a bystander hearing the dialogue, it just makes it that much more genuine and enjoyable. So how about an update??? 5*.

Must agree with all the other comments especially Kookaburra8 ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

This definitely needs to continue. Awesome story.

A family of kids that goes through the loss of the parents face a lot and these kids something that so wonderful. I really enjoyed how it all happened and hope that they continue the closeness.

A great very well written story

Lots of folks frown on this, personally I've never been close with my family. But I think if you're a close family and under certain conditions, like theirs is, go for it. I'm told that family is there for you when you really need it. Glad the story worked out so well for them. Well thought and written. Thanks for sharing the great story. Another chapter would be fun too !!!

I love the complete naughtiness of it all.

Very hot, thanks for posting it.

Deserved and given a 5 star rating - Thank you for sharing your gift for erotic writing ....... T

Loved it!!! I think I will keep reading your stuff.