All Comments on 'A Boy In Babeland Ch. 11'

by Nemasis Enforcer

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
yes that rocked!

one more please and make it mom again they could really get kinky

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
loved it

next one make it a 3 way with mom and the kids in their new home

BUICK GSBUICK GSover 19 years ago
CHAPTER 12

MOM SHE DESERVES IT. BUT WHY SHOULD THE MOVE ALONE AS HE HAS ALL OF THEM NOW. AND I DON'T SEE MOM ON THE PILL WHILE NOT HAVING SEX OVER THAT LONG PERIOD OF TIME AS WELL AS THE VIRGIN SISTERS, BABIES SHOULD BE ON THE WAY BY NOW SO MANY AREAS LEFT TO EXPLORE.

lesliejoneslesliejonesover 19 years ago
Yes...April and Mom

I didn't expect to like it but the story had a warmth to it and I came to feel concerned for all of the girls, Mom and Lee. I would love to see another episode with Lee, April & Mom because I love the idea of Mom being spanked and disciplined by April this time.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
yes....Mom, April, Trish

The mom because its been five years, april should be in it because she's the Main squeeze. I also say something with trish because there was mention that she had a crush on him for a while.Or maybe one giant house warming orgy.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Thought

Kim and Mom take on Lee.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
yup.

April walking in on Maria tied up and helpless would be my dream come true!

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
more, More, MORE!!!!!!!

Why stop there? the series is great!! I believe that the next chapter should include either mom or dawn, or Both.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
3somes needed!

Yes With Kim april and lee or april Stephanie and lee.

LastoftheGreatMikeysLastoftheGreatMikeysover 19 years ago
whoa

yes...but why not have them all gangbang him?

wytethornewytethorneover 19 years ago
hell yes

Next should be mom april and kim.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
yes.. Ch12 - they stay at home

Make Lee and April stay and share a room at home, and let all of them enjoy a lot of gangbangs. Let April take on Maria hanging helpless but very horny, while Lee is banging some sisters, forgetting his tied up-mom.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Chapter 12,13,14,15,16++++

Please have Marie put Kim on the pill,after that have the

girls stop by for threesome's. In another chapter have April

set up a schedule for mom and girls. Let Lee with help from

April continue to help Kim.

Bandit1Bandit1over 19 years ago
As usual, an excellent job!

And yes, I would like to see more chapters in this story.

I don't have any ideas on where you should take it, your mind is doing a pretty great job all on your own!

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Please don't stop writing chapters

Why not having a gangbang orgy as the next chapter with all of them at April and Lee's new place where he gets to fuck all their butts and tits?

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Keep them coming

Great story.. keep them coming and I'm sure everyone will keep reading :D

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
yes

Have Lee get with april and kim at their new house

dirtybear42dirtybear42over 19 years ago
YES CHANGE ROOMES

Lee and April move into Moms room, Mom into Lee's room and April has to share Lee with all the sisters and Mom

Nemasis EnforcerNemasis Enforcerover 19 years agoAuthor
POLL CLOSED

Hi everyone

Thanks for all the requests and I have taken them all down, I am now counting up to see who will be in chapter 12

Please no more e-mails or comments asking for people to be included, you'll have another chance after chapter 12

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Next chapter

Yes. Try starting with Lee and April moving out on their own. Just try to work out that storyline

Fermenal1Fermenal1almost 18 years ago
great stories i wish never end

maybe a goodbye gangbangm honeymoon with april you sory is so hot continue the GREAT job maybe until chapter 40 or something one question he always cums in the sisters(no complain) but all are in the pill or something no one gets pregnant?? , maybe a bukkake session including kim, dawn and marie

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
what should be in it

make lee give a cum facial to april.

Also have april do a footjob to lee making him cum all over her pretty feet.

And put in a bit of blowjobs

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
WHY????

Why does it have to end? Why do Lee & April have to move out now? Why can't April & Lee just start sharing a bedroom? Why can't mom & the other sisters share each other so mom doesn't have to wait for pleasure since her "re-awakening". You have MILES to go before you sleep!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
kim all d way

include kim..........plzzz

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
ruined

you had a great series going but ruined it by having lee and april move out it would have been better if when they told their mother they wanted to move out and live together she said "NO YOU ARE NOT MOVING OUT APRIL WILL MOVE INTO YOUR ROOM WITH YOU LEE AND IT WILL BE OFF LIMITS TO EVERYONE ELSE EXCEPT BY INVITATION BY ONE OF YOU IF YOU STILL WANT TO MOVE OUT AFTER THREE YEARS THEN YOU CAN BUT THIS WAY YOU CAN BE TOGETHER AND NOT HAVE TO GET JOBS JUST CONCENTRATE ON EACH OTHER" that would have been a much better way to go

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
sorry

good story until they say they are moving out good way to kill the relationship at home they don't need to work so they can be with each other when ever but if they move out they will need jobs leaving little time for love and sex especially since they have never worked before the strain will hurt thier relationship big time way to ruin a good story

AquaticaAquaticaover 13 years ago
Concern

To all of the people who have bashed the idea of them moving out I just want to say this. It's a fucking fantasy story. In a story your characters don't have to be that realistic.

Nemasis Enforcer, you're story, all 11 chapters of it, are pure works of art. I realize it's too late but know you did great. Have a few chapters about what it is like with them living alone, with each of the sisters come over, plus the mother. maybe a orgy, some more lesbian scenes would be nice.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
real dumb

they got together because they had no jobs but when they move out they will need to get jobs meaning they will not have time for each other and might drift apart. you killed the story i don't think you used your head on this chapter get smart and delete this and the following chapters and rewrite them keeping them home with the family where they belong

olderman66olderman66over 11 years ago
More

Yes all of them in an orgy.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
more

defo orgy with all of them

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

there is nothing to compare to cumming inside my mom's pussy........ I love her so much and she's been making my babies since I was 16

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Of course mom had to get some! :) ...a lot easier on her conscious knowing that all of her girls had had him, hehehe.

I still say boo hiss on them moving out!! She just needs to move into his room and get primary dibs on his dick! ;) its a win win for everyone!!

Kookaburra8Kookaburra8about 7 years ago
Must agree with Anon ( Ruined )

My thoughts too . Can't see the logic of them moving out if he's still going to give give a bit of slap and tickle on the side when they came around for a visit. He could have been top dog in the kennel at home and had any bitch anytime. Plus you made a void point also about the pregnancy. I'd laugh like hell if Mum and Kim fell pregnant what would big sister say or do if they did ???. Still not a bad story is suppose. ⭐⭐⭐⭐..

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Unconditional love of a family

I agree that they could stay with the family except for one reason. Lee even though young, could not satisfy each and every one of those woman every day. I suppose they could come to an agreement as to when and who but because of the way April and Lee feel about each other, would it be fair to them. If they move out, I believe April should be the one with Lee. In fact I know it has to be April.

AS far as if they move out, you are the writer and you have done a great job.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
How fun

WoW what a loving family neat Sisters.....Yes,yes Chapter 2,3,4,5,6,7....why can't they do Sleep overs...You are a Wonderful writer...I personally felt like I was Lee Fucking all Those Wet Pussys.and having all those love Juices pouring all over my Body Aaaaaaaaasssss YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS.....I was pictureing sucking all his Beautiful Sisters Wet sex dripping Pussys......And sooooooooooooooooo sweet and soft pussys.I thought please keep going Don't Stooooooooooooooooop and then the story was over...........It just reminded me of of a true life Story.Between a mother and her Daughter...They did Massage s And all over my Naked Body.It was so Wonderful has they first took me to the back room to give me a smugg Bath and then soaping my Body from head to toes.stopping to Stroke and Suck my Cock.ever so slowly...My Cock danced to attention.Oh how My Cock wanted to play with their Pussys. I begged to have then Ride me ...They Giggles and said "We know your Manhood is Ready .,......But we are not done With you here Bradford as The Daughter moved down to my Hard Cock To Stroke and Suck my Cock. Ohbhbhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh my Gosh Her Warm Soft mouth felt soooooooooo Good... My Cum Started boiling in my Balls.... Oh I felt like I was locked out side of God's " Garden of Eden love Gates All I my hurting Cock Wanted to just jump into the warm Sex Juices ponds in the Garden .......and I reached over and play Ed "Toggle Time" with their Warm Tight Wet pussys....I was Amazing how Wet they were .....,..They finally led me back to The Daughter bed Room .....And Suck my Cock some as I Got to play with Her tight warm Pussys ..........The mother Came and also Started Sucking my Cock They She took a Condom and put it in her mouth and put it on my Cock ......She said to me We are Ready for some "Horse Riding".......They took turns riding my Cock It was just so pleasant to Be in their Pool of Sex Juices........ Aaaaaaaaasssss YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS.I Screaming . Meanwhile they are both Enjoying moannnnnnnn in.too ......After about a hour I Screamed "The Roof" off Their House As I too Empty my Balls of Warm Cum into their Wet Pussys.........Then The Daughter turned back to me With her Gorgeous lusy blue eyes and Quietly said to me "Not so loud...... Bradford you will wake Dad......We want to fuck him in the Morning.....I'm Tired"😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋☺️😋😋1

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
I love The stories.especially "Boy in babeland"

Wow.!!!!!!!!!!!You do a beautiful job of writing.so sensational.....(Does your pussy get as Wet as our Cocks get fully Erected😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😎😍)??As we read your so much h fun per Sex Article s,,,That be so cool if there is a Brothers out there that is like Lee....I got so excited and my Cock got so hard...as Lee was Fucking his Gorgeous fun Sisters.......Sorry I could so imagine his Sisters Cumming on my Face.........And emptying my warm,Boiling Cum filled Balls into their Wet,Warm pussys...... Screaming.AaaààaaaaaaAAAAAAAAAAAA YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS...Your Stories were so much Fun and Imagination That at work We have 6 Girls also that look Gorgeous......Man they wear the tightest Clothes.....Oh my Gosh Their tits are so nice and their nipples show and their pants are soooooooooo Tight their Pussys shows through🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣...The older one I picture as April,and other as Trish and Steph and Stacy ....#All I want to do is Suck their nipples and put my tongue in their Warm Wet Pussys like Lee got to.......Then I thick Writing is so,so Cool and so imaginive Carie you could Start a whole new story now....Cumming .--Opps Coming off of "Boy in babeland" How about a sex Story about Office Sex....And of course we have a April Stacy,Patrisha,Mary,Stephannie that are sex crazy for their Bosses each of them try to atracks their boss They wear see though bronzes and no bras or panties...........Well Connie as you always start your stories being your warm Wet pussy.....I guess I can end my story by having my Naked Erected Cock......... Connie I can hardly wait for your Chapter s 16,17-34 ....".A boy in Babesland"..... please keep writing.......You make my days So nice......Now girl get Naked ....get your pussy dripping Wet.....😋☺️I believe you have another fun Story coming off your Warm lush lips.To write for us.....Since it's just Imaginenation for me...."Oh just go Wild Girlfriend...play with your Warm wet pussy......and let your imagination "Flow"into our Face-book,As we lick up every "Page of Delightful " Reading......Have fun I just enjoy your Imagination writing..as each Word "Strokes" a tickle on the head"And slides warmly down each sentence...and at each word you "Cum" up with a whole new warm wet Subjects Idea---Thushing" into" a new Warm wet exciting--------Story.....Thank you so much I enjoy your Stories...........please keep writing .....keep them "Cumming "......... Isn't Writing fun !!???😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋.....Oh my Gosh.....As the Nude (New) Idea slips two stairs at a time .......towards "The Covers of "........................Her( nude) new Book and Chapter s.............Oh is she Excited and Wet yet,..............her Chapter is Waiting.............................by the bed!!!!!!!!!!😋😋😋😋😋😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😎😎😎😎😎😎😎

lbaldhead51lbaldhead51almost 3 years ago

good stories so he make all of them pregnant keep it going

01Timber6701Timber6712 months ago

This is the best chapter so far

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