All Comments on 'A Bright Moon'

Your short stories and articles had better be good, because your erotica sucks - no character development, no insight into motivation, no rationale for your story's existence. Bland, boring, and unstructured. Your Gay Male stuff may be better, but I wouldn't know - I don't read in the Gay Male genre. Stop wasting your time until you've polished your writing skills. Read some of the good writers on here (there are some) and study their methods and you might write something worth reading. So far, I haven't found anything like that on your site.

I usually write these "off the cuff," I guess you'd say. It's usually written in one go with no edits. The characters have no thought to them. I'm just horny and want to write. Why bother thinking about anything beyond that? People seemed to like my Basketball PAWG story. You can check that out.