by nikki_2021
hi there, i loved the story and can't wait for the next part.
great work
You have a knack for writing. On the next part, you have Steven finally be able to get lucky with Emily. Please hurry with the next part. Loved every bir of it.
Hot Damn! Just read all seven chapters and all I can say is MOOOOORRREE!!! Please please please post more soon!
Just read all 7 Chapters and can hardly contain myself! I can hardly wait for the next one. Please keep writing.
The story keeps getting better and better. I can't wait for the next chapter.
This is just amazing. Please don't leave us hanging though. Steve needs too hook up with his mom and his aunt and have everyone know.
great story, u leave just enough to the imagination wish i knew more please keep it going for a long long time
Couldnt go to bed till I had finished the whole story..... its 5.45am now!!!
You MUST continue with this story--I think you should somehow have a family orgy somewhere in a continuing chapter.
Wow!!! Just read all 7 chapters, and now i'm desperate for another. Please don't leave it with so many possibilities left unexplored.
Please please don't leave us waiting, glad you gave us the next installment!
I love this story!!! I hope you continue to write incest stories, you are my favorite author for that genre!!!
Just read all 7 chapters. Love it. Please keep the story going. I Can't wait to see what happens with everyone. PLEASE KEEP GOING. I need more. THANK YOU.
Wow, terrific story, loved every bit. Please write more, I can hardly wait.
What a fabulous story. The characters are real, the story has a nice thread and flows without seeming forced. Quite professional.
Omg this was the best set of stories I have read thus far. I cant get enough and am addicted to nikki.
I sincerely hope you have enjoyed some of the orgasms that you have written about....you have a great talent for writing. Keep up the work. I've tried to cum again, but you've drained me tonite! I cant wait until my better half gets home so I lick some pussy while I think about this story
man nikki u r the best. these stories r totaly fucking awesome. i wish i could fuck my sister, but she is what we would could striaght, so i have a 8 in. cock that is still a virgin. but thanks for the chance to cum.
This is one of the best stories I have ever read on this sight I wanted to say u should see if u can make this in to a porn because it would be the best one ever
The best erotic scene in this chapter is when Adriana cups her Aunt Olivia's boobs from behind in the dressing room as Julia watches. The mental picture of an attractive mature woman in that situation with her niece and daughter is, well, a schwing in a heart beat! I have been coming back and re-readind that scene often since discovering it years ago. It never fails.
I love the way it keeps slowly progressing but get her on the pill lol. A few mistakes on page 1 but still damm good. thanks lots cant wait 4 Julies DP
If god could talk, I bet he'd be saying "you're bad person Nikki_2021", at least by christian standards, but I really think the line is "you're dirty minded person Nikki_2021" since this is a great story (almost typed "movie", it's that good) I love the multi chaps, and I love the story lenght, though I wonder when they have their true taken from themselves. hehe. (both loosing their virginety for real to eachother)
cant wait to read more, im reading it while at work and can not help but take too many rest room breaks ;)
this is another awesome chapter nikki, keep them (me) cumming please ;) *5
Now we can add mother/daughter to the list of combos. That was the only thing missing so far.
Now I'll hope for the following threesomes, mother/daughter/son, mother/father/daughter and mother/aunt/daughter.
I'm so looking forward to getting to the end if chapter 11 and trying to figure out who hasn't fucked whom. ;-)
...of this fucking saga. So many highlights to the imagination my interests are peaked. Great writer. Great sex
... a whole family of sluts. And a great time should be had by all.
Why just why, this is just turned into one big fuck fest with every family member fucking every other family member. From me wishing that Julie would only be with her brother and vice versa. this is totally unrealistic and at this point i wouldnt be surprised if the entire family ends up in a massive orgy. This is a purely lust driven couplings and there is no true deeper love that you find in stories like Just The Six Of Us or My Brother My Lover.
It really makes you wet thinking about all the sex that is going on. There is still errors in grammar that need correcting but otherwise I loved this story and can't wait to continue in the series.
Wish they could adopt me!
Can’t wait for the next chapter.
What a taboo family.
Omg what an outrageous fuck fest. Monster cock wallowing in cunt, cunt and still more cunt. Eating cunt and fucking cunt at the same time, while two more women eat each other on the same bed at the same time. And monster cock getting to fuck and suck them all. A truly cunt crazed fucker like me. The more I get the more I want, never get enough. I so adore cunt in every way, when I am enjoying fucking and sucking hot sexy cunts I just never want to stop. I just keep going and going till I and the women pass out from sexual overload and exhaustion. Absolutely fabulous. Cunt crazed fucker, Lanc’s UK.
Wow this story is just absolutely amazing it’s really smokin’ hot just get my nose out of it all.
It is just one major fuckfest which I think might coming together with all parties knowing about what each of them have been doing.
Nikki: I absolutely love your stories! Only found you Friday... you have basically kept me busy all weekend! These stories are amazing! Started with "Cunning Linguist" -- which was so incredible --and this is my second series. Don't have an account, but will sign these as Outcome. I plan to go through your whole library. Please don't stop writing! Thank you so much for sharing! Time to get back to it (and i need to hydrate)! - Outcome
I’m really enjoying this. Lots of plot, lots of sex. I think this family needs one of those boards from the original L Word, where that girl tracks everyone from Shane to document who is doing whom.
Love the story, so many possibilities still to explore. I hope you keep it going
Needacoldshower
I sense a family orgy in the making! Another well thought out and written chapter. I look forward to reading the next. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.