by island_man
I think that this is a really well-written story. Good sense of writing and grammar makes this one of the better stories I have read.
Keep it up!
I thought that although being a bit long, there is a lot of detail in the story.... really good...
I loved this story... not so keen on your shorter ones, but the longer ones have more background to them...
I not too happy when you suggested their brother join in on the fun. laugh like hell if Jenny of all people fell pregnant just to hear her response and yes it can happen being on the pill. I should know my wife did..Good ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ story so far, just don't ruin it.
If Island_Man is reading reviews of this story then it would be nice to continue this story. As you ended the story "To Be Continued" it would nice to do so. This story could take so many interesting paths, wife and sister get pregnant, etc. I agree that the brother should not be included. The threesome would be just right. Story was well written and gets my 5 star vote.
Great story - very very erotic. Great characters and great writing. Would like a continuation in the same vein!