All Comments on 'A Chance Meeting at the Library'

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blue_elephantblue_elephantabout 12 years ago
good story

keep writing very erotic and sexy

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
A very erotic touch!

potential of a great writer to emerge, please continue a few more chapters, a love story of old and young would be very inspirational! And a very best of luck to you

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Loved it!

I have to say, this was one weird ass story.. hahaha.. I don't generally like mature stories where either of the participants are elderly, but I am so happy I kept reading this one, as the meeting outside of the library was colorful and beautifully written. I think what made it weird was not knowing where it was going in the earlier portion with all the public phallus displays and what not, but again, I loved it. A great mix of perversion, and tenderness. Thanks for the submission.

Reiner43Reiner43about 7 years ago
A story that draws you in!

Very realistic - great stuff!

Wolfgang1955Wolfgang1955over 4 years ago
Sucks

Story should be in perverts section.

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