All Comments on 'A Cycling Odyssey Ch. 05'

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Mike9947Mike9947over 3 years ago

Another 5

But a tip

As a story teller it would have worked better for me if you broke it up and integrated it, or if each published piece had a bit of both.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
very well done

Great story line and great sex scenes. Please keep working on this series as I can't wait a year for another chapter.

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Retired and still making good memories with some time on my hands to imagine and draw upon our experiences for inspiration. Fantasies shouldn't end at marriage. They should be enjoyed in the security of a long and loving relationship.

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