All Comments on 'A Daring Reporter Ch. 01'

Please continue, I loved it :D

Thanks a lot!

Not bad, but I would have preferred that it hadn't progressed so quickly from a subtle tease to a strip show.

Not far from the truth. Many of female sports reporters give beaver shots and panty teases. A key is to act as if it is unintentional. It is a good trend

I love these kinds of stories. You've done an excellent job of defining our heroine and showing the start of her sexy adventures. You've also done a great job of pitching the right amount of tease to pique my interest.

If that wasn't enough, you've got a pretty good handle on story and prose style. A few typos, I think, but they didn't interrupt the narrative flow.

I seriously cannot wait to see what Lisa gets up to next. You've officially got yourself a fan.

If Lisa is already stripping down to dark lace panties, then the lace should get lighter and more transparent each Friday. Natalie should get involved too, wearing skimpier and see-through outfits. Lisa and Natalie could do a program wearing only layers of lace sundresses; each time the camera cuts away a layer is removed. (Like the 7 veils, so at the end they are each wearing wearing ONLY a single, thin, fully transparent layer of lace. Lisa and Natalie could do special stories where they work as bikini models - thongs and microkinis of course, visit a nudist colony, work as nude artist models for painters, be photographed nude for a men's magazine, be actresses doing nude scenes on stage and in films, nude models for medical school exams, work as nude dancers: strip club plus modern dance or ballet.

amazing story keep it coming

I love the theme and I want to read more...

Thanks for sharing...

RecHiker

these are great .... love the tease stories .. ;)

Isn't it the Italian broadcasters that have the Nude News?

I had been toying with the idea of writing a story similar to this one, but I think your story just blew mine out of the water!!! Great idea...well thought out.excelently executed! I hope the rest of the story matches up to the beginning!

Bum Chaser

...but since one only is allotted five stars per story, I grant this story all five!!!

YOMEYO

Well I kind of liked this, I could see it as a beginning.

Don't know if I was for or against, but it was a 5

Great story concept keep it up!

What fun. A great start to a promising story.

Interesting, I would love a job were I could titillate myself and many more I hope it gets a lot more raunchy.