All Comments on 'A Daughter's Undying Love'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Lovley Vamp

Short and sweet with added Vampires. Nice and hot. I liked it ^^

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
To Short

I hope it will be A ch2 but you need to make it a lot longer

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Wow...

That was incredibly hot. I got unbelievably wet just reading it!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Need more

That was a great story. I hope there is more to come.

AverygoodlayAverygoodlayover 12 years ago
Different Kind of story

Different kind of story, I liked it, reminds me of a T.V. show I love to watch called True Blood, it has this fantastic redheaded teenager named Jessica, I would let her drain me just to feel her body.

Keep writing, this was good for a short story, like to read Ch #2

WarfolomeiWarfolomeiabout 12 years ago
Nice.

Love beyond the grave.

Gryphon1321Gryphon1321over 9 years ago
Cool story

Very interesting and well written would love to read more

LostCosmonautLostCosmonautabout 5 years ago
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Utterly Fantastic! I Loved It!!!!!!!!!

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