All Comments on 'A Day at the Lake'

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cncstevecncsteveover 17 years ago
Nicely done

Good job! And now for Part 2!

hammer17hammer17over 17 years ago
Well now!!!

I agree write chapter 2.....

drfeverdrfeverover 17 years ago
great story

so real... so hot...

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
realistic

I can relate to this story very well, although it involved a friend's mum - rather than my own mother as is the case in this tale. Well written, convincing and without poretensions: nice one. I hope there is more to relate on this. Thank you for reminding me of my formative years. Steve

LAROCLAROCover 11 years ago
WELL DONE !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

IT COULD HAVE BEEN LONGER, WITH MORE DETAILS . A PART 2 WOULD EXPLAIN WHAT HAPPENS NEXT...........LAROC OF AGES

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
a fine beginning

I'm glad that Miguel's mother sucked off her boy. It's what lots and lots of mothers are doing nowadays. A mother loves her son to pieces, she notices he's got something real interesting jumping around in his pants and sees in his face and body language that he's in dire need of relief. So it's just natural that mom takes her boy's big hard cock in her warm motherly mouth and sucks on it real good till he blows his hot young balls and fills her mouth with his creamy sperm. Of course some mothers who have a very special love for their son will invite him to blow his balls up that hairy hole between their legs, the same wonderful hole he came out of. Those mothers are the best moms of all.

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