All Comments on 'A Disappointing Night Turns Around'

gotten her off

I loved the description of the bj but I agree with the first comment, if she got you off you should reciprocate and go down on her.

Where's your sense of fair play? You should have returned the favor!! Maybe in the next chapter??

Says that they can continue to nurture him into the alpha male he envisions by allowing him to be a bit selfish at the outset of the relationship by only focusing on his satisfaction, perhaps take control of when she may orgasm, and grow the relationship to where he has a house key, Ann's friend becomes their special friend, and Vin stops by once in a while.

Regardless of your future direction, a good read. Thanks.

The story was well written. The story was yours to write - ignore the naysayers.

Until he reciprocates

What is he willing to do for her?

Thanks for sharing.

Well written. Every boys dream. Would liked you to go on a satisfy Ann. Woman have there needs as well. You have plenty of leeway to continue the series.

As I said a marvellous story. Keep writing, maybe bring in a Grandmother.

REgards

Hate alpha-males. Typical of them, they think a giving a bj is such an amazing privilege that there's no reason to satisfy her. She should get together with her friend, she'll have her first orgasm ever. And several more.