by Jonny Cakes
Didn't we tell you what we thought was going to happen and it did? Now there are 2 Male Sluts and 2 whores who love to suck a penis and lick cum from each other.
Would the Author please stop writing these ridiculius stories? If you post them, we do not have to read them. We do recommend that you seek mental theraphy because if this is the way your mind wanders, then we wonder what acts of depravity you could perform in person.
Laura & Lisa, the bi sisters, NO VOTE FOR TRASH
I am waiting for the next installment, but take it back to 2 girls and one guy.
The only reason I'd ever want boobies that big. Maybe for like a week... hmm, where's that lamp I found the other day? :^P
good flow but needs more detail about the players. What do sharon and tammy look like? what are they wearing before the romp starts?
You've got to slow it down, man, just take it easy. Such a rush to get the wet parts out you forget all the things that make the wet parts wet. So take your time, describe your characters, their physical attributes, their clothes, their hair, their piercings, their states of mind. Your stories would be better off for the additional effort. Best wishes and regards,
Cre8iveCat