All Comments on 'A Double-D Desk Romp Ch. 03'

by Jonny Cakes

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AnonymousAnonymousover 20 years ago
797Sickening Trash

Didn't we tell you what we thought was going to happen and it did? Now there are 2 Male Sluts and 2 whores who love to suck a penis and lick cum from each other.

Would the Author please stop writing these ridiculius stories? If you post them, we do not have to read them. We do recommend that you seek mental theraphy because if this is the way your mind wanders, then we wonder what acts of depravity you could perform in person.

Laura & Lisa, the bi sisters, NO VOTE FOR TRASH

HighHighover 20 years ago
Great Story

I am waiting for the next installment, but take it back to 2 girls and one guy.

AnonymousAnonymousover 20 years ago
Yummy.

The only reason I'd ever want boobies that big. Maybe for like a week... hmm, where's that lamp I found the other day? :^P

AnonymousAnonymousover 20 years ago
Keeping It Up

good flow but needs more detail about the players. What do sharon and tammy look like? what are they wearing before the romp starts?

AnonymousAnonymousover 20 years ago
GREAT

mOVE THIS INTO THE HOME AND ON WEEKENDS

Cre8ivecatCre8ivecatover 20 years ago
slow down...take it easy

You've got to slow it down, man, just take it easy. Such a rush to get the wet parts out you forget all the things that make the wet parts wet. So take your time, describe your characters, their physical attributes, their clothes, their hair, their piercings, their states of mind. Your stories would be better off for the additional effort. Best wishes and regards,

Cre8iveCat

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