All Comments on 'A Father's Love'

more please...

You tell a story like it is. No 10" cocks or 48DD breasts, but you write with passion. Keep up the good work.

Wow what a debut story. You really write this father daughter incest tale well. Hope to read more from you. Thanks

An excellent first story - good plot, strong, well-defined and believable characters. You made the relationship between the characters feel real, but didn't make the sex between them feel forced or unnatural. Good job!

yes yes yes more more more

post more

Would love to hear more ...

Please contiue this story...

very well done and very believable....f45g

Very hot. Hope you continue.

This was a very tender love story. It was excellent told and unfolded in perfect sequence. Your writing style needs a little help, but altogether this was a wonderful first attempt a writing for this venue.

Prolonged_Debut10

Very detailed and tender. Very believable too. Check your spelling and grammar errors--few of them, but still able to read at a good flow.

Otherwise, excellent job capturing emotions and understanding the teenage language and reactions. You have inspired me to get back to writing! Very well done! Keep it up.

THANK YOU!

This is excellent tender love story. It was unfolded in perfect sequence, one step at a time. A man needs a loving daughter to take such good care of him.

Yes. I would like to read about other adventures.

Not too bad. I gave you a 4.

I know when a story is good. If I save it to my computer for later reading, that means it's good. Yours made it to my HD unlike 90% of the other gibberish being posted these days on here.

A beautifully erotic story, realistic & based on a foundation of tender love - always the best. Look forward to hearing about your adventures.

Had a great build up, not rushed like so many stories just suck and fuck.

Was tender and loving not something planed by either of them but came out of their love for each other.

Father was gental and caring taking her virginity

Great build up to the story. Not contrived or overly sexy or forced..

You can always tell when something really happened. It just sounds so much more believable. Very good and tender, would like to read more. Please continue on.

The gentle tenderness and caring come across. They add a deeper dimension to the relationship.

Things to note:

1, you could have not talked about his dick size. it never makes sense to me why authors do that, unless there are multiple male partners for the girl. So even though it was so loving, i kep.t being concerned things were going to take a turn for the worst, and that i would not enjoy where it went.

i love nice stories about nice people doing nice things for each other, and this was an extra-sweet one. thanks for sharing!

I seldom read incest stories. I happened on your story yesterday and it was different. Nice! It didn't push an unbelievable edge, didn't contrive some impossible story line..... It just took off gently and slowly build up to warmth.. I loved it.

I read these all the time.

yours was great, slow build up,liked the part of cock size, not bragging about 8 or 10 inches,[really], slow going , really interesting story, loved it read every word slowly, made my morning, thanks

Wow. Just... wow! I cannot begin to express the gratitude and thanks I have for everyone's positive comments. It's humbling, to say the least. I'll start the next chapter soon, and I'll do my best to keep everyone's feedback in mind as I do.

Thank you again!

A very enjoyable read and well written.

good and well written story. Only error I remember was the typo of "to" in lieu of "too." I second the request for more stories. A joy to read, Thank you.

Well written and good use of words loved it

Write more

The beginning of a true love story!

It was perfect, just like how a father is to his daughter. Please do write more!!

amazing. Please write some more. This story felt real and showed authentic feelings.

Nice story. Thanks and keep writing.

Awesome story!

Please keep writing them - I quite enjoyed it ;)

Does need an editor, or at least a more passing familiarity with punctuation. I liked that there was no cheesy dialogue and no huge unrealistic dicks and oversized breasts. Thank you for that. I'm not sure about dad's easy attitude towards adultery, but I'm looking forward to seeing where you take it.

i liked it and cant fault this story at all

the dialogue was good and believable and the settings superb

write more

Sweet loving. Great story.. more...please same general idea of first time with dad.

I'm curious, is it common for a young girl to be called a 'slut' by a friend...which hurts her feelings because she hasn't been slutty, in this case with someones X boyfriend, ...and then become one? I don't usually go in for the incest side of stories but just curious I suppose. The historical part is true... that incest was usually common but it was usually cousin to cousin and even at that distance, genetic weaknesses would manifest its self (after a hundred years of this stuff) not only in mental illnesses but in physical deformities or genetic Blood Disorders. In India, where incest is still prevalent, they have more 'chiasma' births (un-separated twins) than anywhere else in the world. There is a natural affection between parent and child. And there is something called GSA but is it that common? Perhaps our first love (according to ol Sigmund) is our mother/father/sister/brother; Because they are our first close close friends. However, after saying all that, the story was not harsh, nor physically or verbally abusive, showing sensitivity and a long term caring. However, keeping a secret does not work because the 'eyes' will ALWAYS betray the intimacy. Why? I saw it in my x-wife's when her love interest came around before I actually 'caught her'. There is always "that look", that "faint smile", the simple "innocent flirting"... It can not be helped. AND women pick up on it before a man would...because "they" have done it too, at one time or another. Why, in my case, my mother and my aunt saw it coming before I did, but did not say anything to me about it. Not what you wanted to hear I'm sure... this is 'just fantasy'...not history or reality. Thanks for the story. It was interesting and entertaining.

Loved it. Hard me hard in minutes and kept me that way. Thank you

was good . liked it very much . Can't wait to read the next chapter

Definitely Five Stars!

Taboo but when done with tenderness and respect who can fault the shared intimacy? Well done author.

please publish a sequel. Five star story.

This has all the right components and tenderness that instills truly serious believability. No vulgar descriptions or swearing in the story really go along way for me, and this story hits the nail on the head in that department. Well done and please continue writing, just keep the same style (at least for first-time-together stories).

i loved this story! i don't know how to describe this story. i could say it was great or fantastic but it's not .the only word to say what it is is beautiful.thank you for the story. please write more stories.

Thank you for your great work!

-- But *mentioning* it apparently annoys some folks, judging by one of the comments above.

I think that the author's purpose - in describing David's 'size' as about 5.5 inches, is to CONTRAST it with the 'mammoth' cocks that seem to keep showing up in the vast majority of incest stories. Statistics indicate that 5.5 to 6.0 inches is the AVERAGE length of a cock, so David is just an 'average' guy, just as Sam is an 'average' girl. He's no 'Adonis', with a perfect body and a perfect face, and neither is Sam. The heart of this story is the love they feel for each other. Their sexual escapades are no different than in most stories, and it's not his 'size' that rocks her world. It's the fact that he takes time to pleasure her before seeking his own pleasure - and she seems determined to return the 'favor'.

I loved this series. The love between Sam and her father is absolutely perfect. You can tell that her father really adores his daughter very much. I loved when they made love; it was beautiful and I really felt the love between them. Such a beautiful bond between them; they truly are in love. This is definitely the best Daddy/Daughter love story I've ever read.

Part of what infuriated my wife so much was that it put a crimp in her summer vacation plans. Every summer she likes to drive 16 hours and visit her brother and his family for a couple of weeks.

@@ my wife would be driving that shit alone! No way in HELL am I driving 16 hours in a car to visit someone else's family!! Hell, I wont drive 16 hours to see my own family! @@

""What I didn't see was she leaned in to kiss me on the cheek. I turned my head, and her lips and mine halfway met. Kind of like a kiss that was half-cheek, half-lip. Her eyes flew open wide and for a second we were frozen there. She pulled back, turning beet red.

"OhmyGodI'msosorry." She sputtered

"It's okay baby. Accidents happen." I explained. "Now get to bed."""

@@ whats the big deal?? Most of the people in my family kiss on the lips just as much as on the cheek. Not even remotely a big deal! Its weird how different families can be though. You'd call my family 'huggers' I guess, everyones touchy feely... My wifes family? Just the oposite! Lol, you could see the uncomfortableness radiating off my wife the first time she met all my family as *everyone* hugged her! I bet my mom kissed her too, hehehe. Shes gotten better but its taken a while! @@

"" Let me give a little info about my sex life. It's there. It's decent. It's moderately satisfying. But my wife is not adventurous. If it's not one of the three "approved' positions, it's not happening: Missionary, her on top, or doggie style. Anything anal? Forget it. Oral? Yes, but it's a special occasion like birthdays or leap year. It's not every day/every night, but it's not every other month either. It's okay, but kinda bland and predictable. And it had been quite a while since I had any satisfaction other than myself.""

@@ uh, sounds like the wife either needs to get with the program, find a new husband or understand that you're finding a friend with benefits to pick up the things in the relationship that she's blowing off. I can get the no anal, but the rest? Fuck that! If I want a blowjob (i really dont care about them much really) then I damned well better get one. She sure as hell gets my tongue between her legs 99% of the time! ...and that hardly having sex crap? When it reaches the point where you were getting more when you were single than you do married, something is seriously fucked up! @@

"""Well, I know where I'd like to go." She said with a sly grin, "But what about you? I don't want you to do anything you don't want or will regret."""

@@ i love this girl!! Hehehe ;). ...and the dad is awesome, not acting all pansy, whiny @@

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"" I rolled onto my back, pulling her with me. She lay on me, one leg draped over. My cock was once again fully hard, and pressed against her leg I know she could feel it.

"What do you want to do now, dad?" she asked, grinning like the Cheshire Cat.

"I'm going to let you drive this one."""

@@ ugh!! Be the fucking man and do the job like she expects you to! If she wanted to take her own virginity she'd slap a suction cup dildo in the middle of the bathroom floor! Jeez. @@

"" Leaning forward, she reached down and guided me to the wet entrance of her pussy. She smiled at me as she worked it in, keeping herself from sliding it all the way. Slowly, she lowered herself and I felt the head slide all the way in. I couldn't help but moan as I felt her body embrace me. A little more and I felt her hymen push against me. She moved down a little more, then stopped as it stretched. ""

@@ where the hell is it going, lol. The hymen is right past the inner lips, lol! @@

"" "Yes dad. Cum inside me. I want you to. I need you to."

I must be more auditory than I thought, because her words were the trigger. I buried myself inside her as deep as I could, crying out as I erupted inside her. Everything went white as my orgasm hit me. I couldn't see or hear anything. Everything was centered on my cock inside her pussy, unloading as much cum as I could inside her. ""

@@ same here, I love the sexy, naughty, dirty talk. Trying to get my wife to talk is like pulling nails though, lol. :/. She barely even makes noise when shes having a back raking teeth biting orgasm, lol. @@

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"Wish I could stay inside you forever." Yeah, it was a lame thing to say but it was what I was feeling at the time.

"Yeah. I can feel you getting softer though." ""

@@ lol, Ive said that a few times! @@

Loved reading thisstory again!! I havent ran across it in a while though so was great to revisit it! (And do fun commentary too, hehe)

Look forward to anything new you write! Thanks again!!

definately a 5.

Author Jeff Wiles, an "author" on Lounge of Authors, has a book called A Father's Love, copyright 2015, that appears to be a literal word-for-word plagiarism of this story that I wrote and put on Literotica back in 2014.

I would much rather you read these stories for free here than pay that thief $1.99 for copying and pasting my work and putting his name on it.

This story embodies 95% of the material I hope/ look for in these stories. All the emotion, setup duration, reality factors and finally a few basic (correct) body function portrayal's. The only real problem I had with any of this story (which did slightly take me out of it) was when it came to the actual penetration part of the sex. Shes a virgin, which means she knows almost nothing about the process of sex (timing,rythym etc.), therefore would almost certainly not be in cowgirl position.Missionary is the best, most practical position for first timers;letting the man set the pace, maybe some teaching along with it. Other than that it was a REAL beauty of a story, with perfect length and the points I made in the begging. KEEP it up please!!!

Loved the whole story, gradual nice buildup. Great love AND sex scenes.I would like the pregnancy thing in there too. Great story!!!

This is just what I look for in a father-daughter incest story. Keep up the good work.

I really enjoyed your story go a head and add another chapter

This story was magnificent and I came so hard I had to stop reading. Now I'm back and heading for chapter 2. Thank you for a great cum!

There are some really talented writers on here! This is a beautiful, tender, meaningful, loving yet erotic and somewhat realistic story. Nothing forced or coerced. In fact, this seemed to be a situation of mutual seduction. This is the kind of story and writing style that I really like to stumble upon. Some things that make it realistic is: FINALLY, here is a male that does not have a gi-normous cock. All those 8" and 10" shlongs found elsewhere were giving me a complex. Interesting that he (dad) is also older than most dads found elsewhere. The daughter, Samantha, has "B" boobs instead of Double D's. And dad describes Samantha as taking after him in size (maybe she's tall or big boned?). She sees herself as fat but dad of course sees her as beautiful. She even acts a bit self conscious at one point but dad puts her at ease. So, maybe she is not the demure or petite (anorexic) model type material but she is definitely attractive and sexy. Before I forget, and this is not a criticism but I do wish, wish, wish that writers would give a bit more physical description of the the females, i.e., height, hair color and length would help with visual depiction. And do things "jiggle" when the female moves? Or is there a definite bounce? Btw, could navel oranges, grapefruits or even cantaloupes be used to describe tit size?

A couple of other things I liked was how Samantha and dad set ground rules before things got really "busy". A very mature, respectful approach. I really like the trust and comfort level that dad and daughter have with each other from the beginning. It's a time saver. The other was how the writer had dad to make a point that Samantha is on birth control pills for the purpose of regulating her period. Just an observation here but I am guessing that the author is a female as most guys would not know that birth control pills can be used for that. The only reason I know this is because my wife was on birth control pills back in the day for the same reason. This story rates a 5 and more imo. I hope chapters 2 & 3 are at least this good. -bern1965(pending)

Enjoyable, although I seem late to the party.

The best father daughter I've ever read

I love all of your stories, MCN. Thrilled to have discovered this gem!

Your story is truly amazing and seem so real. Please write some more you did an awesome job.

XOXO

Annie

I wish I was sam there

So hot. Wet panties

This story brought back such sweet memories of my own dear daddy. There is nothing more endearing than the love of a father for his daughter that is totally reciprocated by his daughter. My daddy and I had true love and affection for each other for over 50 years. Thank you for putting this love into words.

What happens when mom comes home?

HC

Well developed story. Not just a wham bam, Thank you mam.

Just found this story on Literotica! You truly write very well and I, for one, certainly hope that you restart your hobby. (for selfish reasons, of course!!! :) )

damn so hot I wish I was the daughter in this story

Sweet story. Thanks