All Comments on 'A Fresh Love Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
lovely...

start - took me away almost immediately - looking forward to the rest of this tale.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Great!

I loved the mix of comedy and suspense that this first chapter has unfolded. Character development and description of both the characters themselves and their work place was very well done. I love stories like this where there is a tease before people just start ripping clothes off. Can't wait to read more!

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