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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Build up.

A lot of build up for a very short ending.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
h'ordouvres

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
a kiss led to this

"The names within have most definitely been changed; with the hopes of somebody avoiding being beat to death with a shovel."

No shit? REALLY? WHO EVER uses real name in fiction?

More than being much build up for little this is a big YAAAWWWNNNEEERRR.

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