All Comments on 'A Life Changing Ring Ch. 03'

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dutch513nelsdutch513nelsover 5 years ago
Not Bad

That was a good short story .

C_frommnC_frommnover 5 years ago
Well

Considering he was going to learn about the Ring. He missed a Golden opportunity.

He should have gotten into Sisters head and read her thoughts and Desires for later use. Chapters could be Longer.

gpetagpetaover 4 years ago
promising

hope it will go on with hot incest

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Hot sex, but....

Stars taken away for being SO cliche´ with the over-sized breasts.

Also, a seven inch penis is an inch OVER the American average, and more than that over the world average. So not only a bigger dick than reality, but obnoxiously downplayed.

Then...allusions to gay-male sex.

Are you trying to lose every reader you managed to keep past the first two chapters?

Hope this picks up.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Nicely written! It got me hard. Looking forward to reading more.

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