by PygmyCoho
Thanks for this! I do have to say Cindy is, to put it mildly, precocious, so good luck Rose and Rachael.
Delightfully romantic story - loved the ending and the love making, and so easy to return to for a reread. So glad you reworked/reposted - does that mean we will get to enjoy some new stories? Hope so. 😊
This is at once extraordinarily sweet and extraordinarily hot. Congratulations!
Hi, cute story. I like the themes and the characters. You have quite a few typos that are a little distracting.
Exceptional. Loved it! By page 4 I had already decided this was one of the best stories I've read in a while.
You had some sizzling moments with Rose masturbating to thoughts of her former student. Could have just skipped ahead, but you built things up to a climax. Pun intended.
Btw I spotted 'ridged' which should be 'rigid.' Oops. These things happen.
Superb stuff! Apart from the few typos already mentioned, great writing, great buildup and pacing, and loooovely sensitive and detailed sex scenes.
Such an incredible story, with just a touch of the "forbidden" in a student/teacher romance. The ending was absolutely adorable!! Cindy is going to be a handful!!
Being honest with you, I arrived on this looking for smut. But I found so much more. This was hot yes ( the y e a r n I n g, it's crucial) but it was sweet and funny. 🥲 very much enjoyed and wanted to make you aware of that. Thanks for the story Pygmy!
This story gets better each time I read it. Loved the story build up. Loved the love! Loved little Cindy! Beautifully written and thank you for sharing.
Beautiful story. Great pacing and well written. I will explore your other works!
Re-read this sumptuous, delightful, heart-warming tale this morning, and I was shocked to realise I hadn't left you a comment to tell you how much I adored it. Sorry, that's very rude of me. How do I love it? Let me count the ways. Firstly, there is the most gentle skirting of taboos, yet it is all above board. So far, so heart-in-mouth. Then the longing. Oh, the longing. We've all been there, and you tap into that heartache and shame-tinged desire so well. Next comes the delicious, sweet moment of realisation, the tentative first connections, the concern, the waiting, the despair and then... the delivery. Oh girl, did you deliver! I loved the gentle skewering of pornified expectations and how you showed the reality of love is so much better.
Yeah, so I really liked this! x
Absolutely wonderful story...
And two adorable characters.
I wish I could give you more than 5*...
Brilliantly written and mmmm the long sensual sex towards the end...
Great ending too...
Loved it.