by CousinObsessed
Another total waste of time read. Where is the incest? Taking semi risque photos of a cousin? Where is the sex? BORING
1 star
DragonRider55
Loved the story. A great lead up and look forward to the next chapter but run it through a spell / grammer checker before posting.
Sounds like it could easily lead to more.
YOU NEED TO PROOF READ STORY BEFORE SUBMITTING, LOT OF SKIPPED WORDS IS WORST PART. STORY GOOD OTHERWISE
Someone criticizing spelling and grammar, spelling it "grammer."
Her comment about sucking a dick got me HARD and HORNY
Can't wait for the next days shooting.
"I'm decent but I don't I'll ever think I'll be on that level."
And that's just one example.
The content is good however you really need to proof read as there are sooo many mistakes