All Comments on 'A Model Cousin'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Crap

Another total waste of time read. Where is the incest? Taking semi risque photos of a cousin? Where is the sex? BORING

1 star

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Editing

Loved the story. A great lead up and look forward to the next chapter but run it through a spell / grammer checker before posting.

Eric_ShiftEric_Shiftover 5 years ago
I'm eagerly waiting for more of this.

Sounds like it could easily lead to more.

sabra16023sabra16023over 5 years ago
Needs Sequel

Enjoyed the story, it needs a sequel. Thanks

bryantoddbryantoddover 5 years ago
1

YOU NEED TO PROOF READ STORY BEFORE SUBMITTING, LOT OF SKIPPED WORDS IS WORST PART. STORY GOOD OTHERWISE

Twisted0QuillTwisted0Quillover 5 years ago
It's grammar not grammer.

Someone criticizing spelling and grammar, spelling it "grammer."

prop69prop69over 5 years ago
An AWESOME and AMAZING START

Her comment about sucking a dick got me HARD and HORNY

Can't wait for the next days shooting.

MeBr123MeBr123over 4 years ago
Good start

I'm looking forward to this series!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Get an editor!

"I'm decent but I don't I'll ever think I'll be on that level."

And that's just one example.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

The content is good however you really need to proof read as there are sooo many mistakes

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