All Comments on 'A Model Student'

The aloof heroine, the pudgy professor, the way she sits on the edge of the dais after modeling, her legs casually apart. You've created a mysterious, smoky, almost noir atmosphere. I enjoyed the story. Thanks for writing it.

This author has at least three unfinished stories posted. This will never be completed.

Well described, well written. A cool story from a woman with a great vocabulary, that adds to the images in our minds.

Perhaps a slower build up to the action.