All Comments on 'A Mother Bound'

This is a good start, but it screams for a Part II. A story like this should not be left open. There has to be more. What happens the next day? Does his mother slowly become submissive, or does she find a way to get revenge?

I like your twisted mind, but consensual sex is much more erotic. This story was rubbish on so many levels. There was no sexual tension. No character development. No emotions. You are capable of much better.