All Comments on 'A New Hobby'

Not a great story, but certainly far from the worst we've seen here. This author has potential: I think you need to work on being clearer about characters' feelings. WHY has the husband lost interest in sex so completely? How does he feel about his wife's adultery: furious, or turned-on? There's less clarity than there should be. Thanks, ohio

A decent story. Good set-up in the beginning – she says what she's going to do, she's serious, he lets her go do it. Twist: most folk would be exaggerating, she's dead serious. That's fine. I could even see Mike getting turned on by it (he must've had something in mind when he wired the house), but it needed more emotional impact from Mike. Obviously the exhaustion is deeper than just being too tired, but we needed to see growth on this (even for a short story like this one). Other than that, not bad.

at last a grown up version of boredom and married life

no screaming or self inflated egos just a couple realiseing marrage and sex are hand in hand and forgetting the bullshit of ownership like so many stories do on here man owns woman and shes his property so if fucked by someone else vengence rules not here tho well done mate i hope theres more to come

as for other comments man must be a wimp? why we all get caught up in lifes bullshit and if we neglect those around us we may pay the price

ems32 again well done more of the same please

After she follows thru once, I would expect him to do something. When the second time happens, it is a repeat of nothing obvious. If he was truly that blasé about her, why bother checking up on her? Then, BOOM, third time, and in mixed-triples play, he's ready to go 'all in'! Just doesn't resonate with me, that he could go from indifferent to hard-core swinger in one fell swoop!

Just like that ! --If my wife did that shed never see me again and any more money off me -----

trash

I presume SOME people must like this thoroughly-boring, tedious sort of stuff, & good luck to them, but I do hope that they discover some effective treatment before too long! For me personally though, it started off hopeful in spite of the guy's total and absolute very long-term abandonment of his sex drive! THIS was TOO much full on at his age, -completely unbelievable. So it quickly descended into a mind-numbing unreadable shitstorm that I personally had to quickly abandon for the sake of my sanity. That's MY opinion, BUT other opinions ARE also available. ZERO points from me though.