All Comments on 'A Night at the Round Table'

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Jim44444Jim44444over 11 years ago
So So

You did not develop a story, just a bunch of sex lines thrown together. The story needs editing. Too many instances of mixed tense in a sentence. You have written better stories.

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I particularly enjoy writing stories about sexually confident, mature wives who need lots of sexual activity, especially interracial - I love to watch my mature wife with young, well-hung black men. The roots of my stories originate from personal experiences and these of frien...