All Comments on 'A Night of Unconditional Submission'

thanks. my cock feels wonderful too. masturbating while reading. you are a sweet, wonderful slut. i'd love to enjoy your submissiveness and see your lovely head between my thighs as you suck my hard cock. are you ready? yes, then we'll fuck through your orgasms and i'll finally fuck your sweet ass for you.

your story has me sooooo horny. still stroking my cock and loving it, but would be so much better if you were pleasuring me. you are so sexy and erotic. thanks!!!

love, art

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Your work always arouses me. Thank you for sharing.

Enjoy ur story, I will be wait for ur next story to be submitted, I would love to suck on ur toes and lick up all ur sweet jucies that would run out of u.

I enjoyed that a lot!

thank you for sharing

...you do kiss and tell! LOL

Ahh i loved the story and i came so hard :)

This was a great read, so good, I read it twice. Thank you!

Another very hot story, thanks so much for posting it.

It is tantalising to wonder how much is true and how much is fantasy!

Loved it!!!!

I enjoyed the dual perspective, it is an approach that gives a great way to give the same scene from the two points of view. Good job.

Unlike the others I did not enjoy the "He said, She said" story style, only able to get through 2 pages. Liked story idea.......

What a fantastic story! I loved the dual perspective, what's going through their minds. I look forward to many more of your writings.

Nice length, a bit long for a single sitting but you can't put the story down, it kind of pulls you along so well that I read it in one sitting. A Night of Unconditional Submission is the authors best to date. Keep the stories coming!

Nicely erotic and with the inevitable question--could you, would, should you again?

Very well done. Dirty domineering man but she does love it & need it so the climax is good. Both viewpoints a plus. 5 stars

What a very well-written and imagined story! From both viewpoints, the characters were clear and the action kept ramping up, tension high enough to start nail-biting. A great read, thanks very much!

Really well done and hard to put down! I liked the dual perspective and they weren't too long. It was strange, a good bit of stuff at the beginning, even the style, was hauntingly similar to some things I had said or written over twenty years ago! ...and then when he mentioned his fav team which was where I was back then, my skin started to tingle and I was hearing the twilight zone theme music playing in the back of my head! Hehe ;)

Anywayz terrific story and a happy ending even if they aren't together!

Jasmine, if he's as nice a guy as you say, he's probably staying away on purpose. I met my first real sub during my "asshole" phase. I took her from her husband and then half a dozen boyfriends over a three year period because I was the only one who could/would give her what she needed. We couldn't be in a real relationship because of the kids she had with her ex. After awhile my conscience re asserted itself and I realized I cared for her too much to keep screwing her life up. So, I just broke it off and disappeared. She's remarried, another kid on the way last I checked. If you care about someone, you have to do what's best for them.

I loved this dual-concept story. This was an exciting tale excellently told and enjoyed.

Love most all your stories and encourage you to further engage in these excellent stories. Best wishes and a Happy Valentine's Day.

Average, but still good. Thanks.

Truly wonderful.

Absolutely fantastic as all your work is.

I loved it, being submissive myself it gave me pleasure reading

This is truly you in so many ways: submissive, nylons, loving, desirable, romantic, sluty. And then, career driven, focused and confident. Very well written with good splashes of character development, plot and dec scenes. Well done Jasmine.

Mostly unbelievable, but if you say mostly true, who am I to dispute it. I don’t get turned on by treating my women badly. In my view women are made to be loved, tenderly, but Jasmine seemed to encourage his action by her submissive behavior. Since that was the obvious intent, the story succeeded.

This dominant loves your slut!

Reminded me of a work friend. She was married, as was I, but at work, our relationship was totally different than at home. At work, she was a total sex slave, to me. Don’t think that you can have a lot at work and in the car afterwards. Between the car and the motel afterward, it was very nice. Head after work every day to someone who was the absolute best. Unbelievable, she loved being an obedient slut, ready to do it all for as long as we could, then leave knowing that the next day would be more of the same…unbelievable

From a hygiene point, it's not good. Fucking a woman with the heel of her shoe when it's been everywhere outside let alone indoors, it's loaded with dirt into the vagina, would cause an infection called Bacterial vaginosis and possibly Pelvic Inflammatory Disease if the infection goes through the cervix. Also the urethra, the tube from the bladder is very near or in the surrounding tissue to the vaginal entrance and a bladder infection from the germs from the dirt from the high heel would happen. Antibiotics will be needed either via a Dr or Hospital. During vaginal sex he tries Anal sex but it is too painful for her, she probably didn't expect that so the Anus and Rectum were not cleaned beforehand so his penis would of been incontact with Faecal matter (even without contact the Anus and Rectum is loaded with E Coli normally and wasn't cleaned out) the bacteria E Coli is very nasty outside of the Gastrointestinal system. And he doesn't wash/clean his penis before putting back in the vagina!! You Never Ever Double Dip without cleaning or using a condom!! E Coli will cause Severe Pelvic Inflammatory Disease which can cause infertility in the woman, and in hospital on IV Antibiotics, which is costly in America. Also a Bladder infection ontop and if treatment is slightly delayed, Septicemia and then Sepsis and the woman will need to be in ICU as Sepsis kills very quickly (50% chance), either a Heart attack or a Stroke or Multi-Organ Failure. While treating that it can go into Septic Shock and Death is guaranteed. Very costly night out. Ontop he takes his penis from vaginal to oral sex and E Coli would certainly cause severe gastroenteritis, and that might involve hospitalisation for dehydration and need for certain Antibiotics IV. Also the woman's Anus hadn't had any training to work up to Anal sex so probable tears to the Anal sphincter, and inside the Anus would cause bleeding, pain and incontinence and other infections, and they didn't swap health info so STI'S, HIV, Hepatitis B to E and unwanted pregnancy could happen as no Condoms were used. I work in ICU in Free Health Care Country and I have seen it quite a few times during my career in treating people, especially women. This is fantasy fiction, But the basic principles of Hygiene have to be followed or these are the consequences for the Woman, certainly not for the Man. Now on a lighter note, fell about laughing that he called his penis "Wally" because it means Idiot or Stupid in my Country!! Anyway right name for his penis as he did do something Stupidly Idiotic with it!! (ps. Note to Author, after so many stories surely you would know about hygiene, especially double dipping as many of the male readers might not know this, despite whatever the story is about you still have a duty of care towards your readers!!!)