by Mystery_Meat
I currently own 9 DVD versions of Christmas Carol, so I had to like this story. I was afraid for a while that your misguided, left-wing political misconceptions would interfere with the story <g>, but they didn't bother at all! Good job.
I did enjoy the story but it would have been alot more fun without the political crap. Jeez...we are bombarded with that stupidness all day...don't need it here.
I dont think the blurbs were done for politcal reasons i thought they were to build insight into the characters personality and mental break so i gave you a 100. I would agree to be careful how you walk that line cause as you see people dont come here to read the news and realism we want a fantasy. So long as (like you did) you word it into the characters persona you should do fine. Your chracter developement and detail were awesome! WEll Done!!
A creatively clever spin on my favorite Dickens. I agree with the other comment, that the very minor political ideas from the main character added greatly in character development. His characters seemed much more real than the usual cardboard ones found here. I'd enjoy reading a sequel!
God will punish you for making a fool out of Dickens! You freaking degenerate!
If you ever expect to make any money with your stories, you better stop insulting the Republicans. I refuse to support Liberals extremists.
So, regardless that the story is well written, creative, and erotic, some trolls give it a zero because a story character has a negative opinion of the worst administration in history. Why are "moral majority" types reading stories at this "depraved" site anyway? A bunch of hypocrites like Mark Foley (R), Larry Craig (R), etc. that's why. This story deserves high marks.