by PrurientFantasies
A massage fantasy told in second-by-second wonderfully descriptive details that put me on the massage table enjoying each touch from Lin. Thanks.
i really enjoyed reading this it was great if my boyfriend was not in the army he get a good time from me reading this lol thank you hey maybe one day all men will get a massage like that from their girlfriends/wives.
story. I like those kind (giggle). Made me wet. Looking forward to more of your work.
There is always more to a good encounter than just breasts and thrusting; it's the little smiles and moans that round it all out. Way to nail every last detail that made it work perfectly.
You should have had him lick his cum from her pussy, have her sit on his face and let it drip out....
The thing that I always harp on to most 'erotic fiction' writers is the 'plausibility' of the storyline. You nailed this one right on the head! Every word worked toward advancing some element of the tale - whether that was a peek inside the protagonists head, or a building of the tension - it all added to the ultimate climax of the yarn. Again, very well done! There were a couple of typos, but nothing that broke the 'readers trance'. Please continue writing. ---- Warmest regards.
This literate submission offers a clear description of an increasingly erotic massage, and the stimulating result many clients can only dream of. For many years my partner and I taught our ten-session course titled "Sensuous Massage for Loving Couples." Our students learned many increasingly sensuous strokes for each part of the body, practicing them on their partners lying on our massage tables. By the end of each session, the unmistakeable sounds of impressive orgasms could be heard coming almost simultaneously from each table in the room. I'm retired now, but I'm still a certified massage instructor and I still teach sensuous massage. I no longer charge for the sessions, because I want to pass my skills on to the next generation. I hope PrurientFantasies contributes additional submissions about erotic massage, because he's one of the best writers on Literotica.com.
Erotic and sensual. Nice descriptions and a truly romantic ending. Liked it a lot
to see that they got together for more than just the sex, will there be more on them, we shall see...
A very sensual and honest story.
It felt very real to me. I was completely turned on by your description of Lin and her sexuality.
I was as hard as I could be when she removed the towel from his "tent"
Good job
Mack
after a long time read something good.great writer.i need a girl like that.