All Comments on 'A Piercing in California'

Nicely done.

Short, concise, and to the point. We didn't have to read through a bunch of background to know that this was a slut wife on the prowl. And you can spell! And use words correctly! So many on here don't know how to. Only one thing: In the first sentence you wrote, "sweat dripping down her back and into her bra in the California heat" and then later when she was in the shop, "She hadn't worn a bra, just the tank," somewhat of a contradiction.

Only mistake I saw in the story. Liked the husband and children back at home. If she had picked up the "SLUT" navel ring on the way out, I can just hear one of the children ask her, when she had forgotten to take it off, "Mommy, what does 'SLUT' mean?" :)

5 stars

how does sweat drip down her back into her bra if a few lines later she isn't wearing a bra

Maybe she is lucky get an serious STD and die!!!

Another writer fascinated with slut wives and clueless husbands. Of course he wouldn’t notice what she did while away. Of course she never picks up a disease from getting some strange. What a wanker world they must live in.

Sluts and cuck stories are boring who cares about ugly people.