All Comments on 'A Porn Shoot Shock Ch. 01'

Please write a sequel to this. Here are some hopefully helpful notes...

1.You need to develop at least the characters of Jana and the main character. How did Jana get involved in the porn industry? Is she still married and if so what does her husband think about it? Does he even know? Is Jana and her husband swingers? Does Jana have another job other than being a Porn Star slut/fluffer or is her job in porn her only source of income? What does the main character do for a living or is he unemployed or a professional student? Would he accept an offer to become a porn star regular himself? Would he take part in a swinger orgy?

2. Jana and the main character need to fuck in the next chapter. And at some point in the series the main character needs to fuck Kayley again and Melissa?

3. Jana has to get the main character into another porn shoot, this one where she, Melissa and Kayley all appear as the on-screen talent with a mixture of men and women. Bang Bros & Brazzers have this as a staple scenario of theirs i.e.

https://www.sexvid.xxx/porn-stars-visit-horny-guys-in-local-dorms.html

http://www.pornhub.com/view_video.php?viewkey=27736435

http://www.xvideos.com/video4037540/valerie_kay_fucking_blonde_coed_with_toy_with_lisa_ann

http://www.pornhub.com/view_video.php?viewkey=620626372

http://www.xvideos.com/video3756402/jada_stevens_playing_naked_twister_with_sexy_coeds

http://www.pornhub.com/view_video.php?viewkey=1343154170

http://www.xvideos.com/video3818733/alexis_texas_dick_fucked_in_kitchen_than_she_masturbates

http://www.pornhub.com/view_video.php?viewkey=1471742243

http://www.xvideos.com/video4133427/jennifer_dark_banging_student_during_college_party

Thanks for the feedback. Although I appreciate the advice, I wrote the sequel a while ago, I am just in the process of uploading stories to the site. Cheers

This story never fails to make me cum like a rocket! Especially love the dirty talk, fucking great, write another one just like it!