by A_Satori
Very, very good. Held my attention the whole length of the story. Well done.
Really enjoyed the story to the 5 & 100 level and now I can't wait for more.! It is 1:00am and if the story was any longer I would still be reading.! GREAT STORY.* Need more like this on here.! Thanks. JAG/TSO
been reading LITEROTICA 4 yrs never voted.But A_Satori deserves acknowlegment. BRAVO !!!
Wonderful characters in a gritty situation which just rings so believable. Truly excellent writing; I think I'm going to be up to the small hours reading the remaining two chapters.