All Comments on 'A Rusty Pipes Deserve Attention'

'fully engorged with a string of semen leaking from the swollen head' - it's not semen, it's pre cum.

'Instead, she rolled onto her kip' - more likely her hip

'Kind of embarrassing, being out her' - or out here

You need to stop and read what you write before you post. Just silly mistakes that can spoil an ok story.

Yes, there are a few typos in the story. This story along with another story, got submitted by mistake. My fault in handling this new format badly. The problem is that if you correct a story here it takes several days for the edited version to replace it, and stories get the vast majority of readers those first few days. So I will send an corrected version in and take my lumps, hoping that the story itself is still worth reading. Sorry

Thanks for sharing.

Tobthe anonymous poster... Relax, if you are getting hung up on insignificant errors, move along... This may not be the site for you.

I enjoyed the story. Simple, fun and it flowed well... Thanks for posting!

This story was a pleasure to read and enjoy. Glad that Ben could see past the wrinkles and saggy tits. The couple of errors didn't detract from story, I think we all knew what your were saying.

Just wishing that Elanor had been wearing her granny panties, my personal favorites :) Thanks for writing and posting.

thank you timber, and everyone else who took the time to read.

Wow! This was a hot story. My only concern is how you describe the man's body parts. Please refer to the chest area as pecs and not as man boobs, because I'm pretty sure that you are describing the young Ben as someone who is sculpted with defined muscles everywhere.

I hope this will have many more chapters with his clients. I won't be surprised if Mr. Collier gets some action with the sexy muscular Ben in the next chapter.

Thank you!

Nice to carry on a family tradition!! Keep 'em coming. If anonymous hadn't liked it he wouldn't have read it all, would he??