All Comments on 'A Shot in the Park Ch. 02'

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kiwibazkiwibazover 10 years ago

Great story, more please

bearsladybearsladyalmost 10 years ago

I would love to read more of this story. Even though this is a good ending point that lets the imagination run wild. Your descriptions of sex makes me want you to describe more

aisielynnaisielynnalmost 10 years ago

*smiles*

a wonderful follow-up to the park. Can't wait to see how far he will take her now that she's across the threshold. Keep up the great writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Great story can't wait to hear mote

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